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08-11-05, 01:02 PM
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"Hollow Tips Pt. 2" ft. Vango
IP: 3240 794D
Atticus = Regular Text
Vango = Bold Text [[Intro]] "Underground Temptists, Collect Our Reps Bitch... Stain The Streets, Bleed, Message Left Seams Momentus... Another Keystyle To Fuckin Whore You All... Yo its your boy Vango back in the set with my main man Atty, Ya Thats Fuckin Right, Back At It Again, Bouta Put A Hole In The Fucking Boards With This One... "Hold The Titles, Idle The Engines... End This As Hollow Tips Injest Your Tensions..." ...Yo it's Hollow Tips Pt. 2, Peep the hottness, [[Verse One]] For most of yall my lyrics are like a shuttle to you a new Discovery, I'm like Terrel Owens in the open field, most you mc's couldn't cover me,- You getting nothing but famine while your still searching for the feast, See Vango's more awaited than Beanies prison release. My Topicals "R" Right Before "T"s(Thee)... By Wich This Means, You Havent Gotta Grain Of Pacients, And I West Indies. I Serve Thin Hoes, What? I Got Moves, Soon You'll See, Dudes Cant Get Over The Pain Yet This Is Ya Window Of Oportunity? Times up, window shut, opportunities closed, im a highight in the twilight, just ask your hoe. To Few To Many To Little To Late, Abuse Gays n Straights, With So Many Flames Who Made It Hot To Ice Kids Ona Page? Thats right mutha fuckers [[Chorus x2]] "Underground Temptists, Collect Our Reps Bitch... Stain The Streets, Bleed, Message Left Seams Momentus... P-, P-... Part Two Dudes Shook, Just Watch... Hand To Four Five More Minuts Till Ya Head O' Clocks... Fuckin Year In The Bag, Backpacking Now Hoe We're Back... The Classic BluePrint Tip Spit, Shit, It's Vango And Att. [[Verse Two]] Vango wit no lryics, that's like the Cayman Islands with no Funds, G Unit with no Guns, Fat Joe with no Pun, And One with no Run. Atticus Prophet... Better Known, Loved...- We Are Shuved? Minus The "R" Bitch Sit Watch Atticus "Pop-het" (Pop It) And We'r Not Talkin Tuff Love. Proof that mircales happen, i put twenty shots in your track and still nobody clapping, See its my show, Atty and Vango, I don't need no Columbian to tell me we bout to blow.- My flows like aid patients it stays sick, shout out BluePrint motherfucker, Socrates suck a Dick- Throw Chryme Some Love, Forever Rep A Loyalist Of C.S. Yes, The Bars My Home Even If I Got The Key To Free Sets. Wrote A Verse To Heavy To Hold, Singed As The Pen Just Broke... Vang Got Soc Lemmy Out Virt To Kill Two Birds With One Stone. [[Outro x2]] "Underground Temptists, Collect Our Reps Bitch... Stain The Streets, Bleed, Message Left Seams Momentus... P-, P-... Part Two Dudes Shook, Just Watch... Hand To Four Five More Minuts Till Ya Head O' Clocks... Fuckin Year In The Bag, Backpacking Now Hoe We're Back... The Classic BluePrint Tip Spit, Shit, It's Vango And Att. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Links: http://<br /> http://community.rap...d=1#post2360058 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...0071post2360071 Last edited by Atticus : 08-11-05 at 01:06 PM. |
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08-11-05, 02:40 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 91CC 50E1
this was good good flow everything nice collab better than the first one look forward to seeing more by both of u
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08-11-05, 05:06 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 3205 57D1
this was okay.. wasn't really feelin it.. jst a lil confusnig lol.. had to read it twice.. yeah flow is pretty good.. but not perfect.. some times flow was off.. topic was nice.. creative lines like the terrel owens line.. thats tite lol.. but yeah pretty good..
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08-11-05, 05:20 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 997D A94C
hmm...the topic is good the fact yall ramble on about being good n shit like vango really did is retarded, vango you have potential but if you really wanna be a good writer i suggest you focus on writin with a spirit, ya know more emotion imagery, the flow was good from both of you atticus you did pretty good your half was a bit different the flow was good you had some metas but imagery was a lil weak emotion was good though, overall nice om i'd like to see some more from both.
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08-11-05, 06:28 PM
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 21BE 5F58
Thanks kid, This was done in twenty minutes. And the fact your telling me I have potentional to me is hilarious. Check my stats and ask around then get back to me. This was a quick keystyle on aim..
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08-12-05, 11:12 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
Lol Come On Para...
You Know I CAN Write Deep Shit... I'll Flood The Board, I Mean Seriously, You Know That... You've Gotta Be Able To Rep And Get Emotional... Im Just Keeping Myself Well Rounded... And Again, Like Vang Said... 20 Minuts... I KNOW There Arent To Many Of You Who Could Do That... .One. |
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