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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
08-25-05, 10:08 PM
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Just Thinkin
IP: 3240 794D
Link:SL.Valentino- Little Tribute
Just thinkin if..1 of my broads'll linger spliffs..in my face Convince me today..to purchase whiskey & blaze Smellin pissy like waste..are local bums holding fifths She attached to my arms..like I'm large golden gifts Passin the projects..striking this nice ass the object This task I accomplish..as midnight flash me honest Roll up optimo's..fuck puffin on newports after sex Collarbone with bite marks..so she's a master vet Moving pass the checks..like no search from customs Penetrate her..everything aches from belly button To lower thigh..I'm only here just to show her life Just thinkin if..I was drinkin with..cold ass ice Without a lil fame..no other way to rekindle flames It's simple & plain..to be in the middle of shame |
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08-26-05, 11:22 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 8A05 210E
ight b honest wit ya it was ok but not as good as it could have been u need 2 expand ur vocab, structure was tha best thang bout it, throw sum meta's in tha mix 2 liven it up also but keep workin' at it continue 2 write & keep ya head up ~1~LUV~1~THUG~
rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206095
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