i've been rappin since my birth certificate
i've been significant since i ever been in it
& im living it so just take one big wiff of it
im no homo and i know that i have no flow
im gettin hold though tryin til i grow old yo
im leavin a note so u know im good though
all the witnesses no that im the best in this
since i can put 2gether the best sentences
raps dead, i'm guessin where the legends is
yes it is and you know so why u even argue
we too far to get more legendz that all true
im not a average young teen no wut i mean
rap the best dream but i lost my selfesteem
fuck audios i aint gone go in until i go in rite
& thats exactly why im typing this open mic
i aint gon go in sight untill im just flowin rite
i can't get by by myself till i can find myself
this my last resort im relying on rv 4 support
but everytime i just get my esteem cut short
or maybe ill just have 2 cut my own life short
cuz my mind's soar & i've lost what i write for

this just a preview of whats ta come for o.m's cuz im gon do o.m's ta try ta find my own style and get my shit out while i try elevatin in audios...i aint gon drop no more audios till i can get myself dope enough ta be atleast decent...and i noticed alotta fools are mixin me up for a wack mc wit lyrics too if so then try ta beat this shit..aint impossible but u cant be no newbie neither.....anyway leave some feed on this short ish i did and expect more ta see from me for a lil while

there's my link
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=204027&page=2

THIS WAS PREETY GOOD,BUT YOUR LYRICS ARE TOO BASIC,BUT I SEE ALOT OF POTENTIAL SO KEEP DOING YOU

uppin...........

kinna basic level but it was tight...you had some cool stuff in there...flow was off in some places but still cool tho...keep it up fam

holla at mine

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aight thanx for the feed come on ya'll how fuckin hard is it ta read sumthin this small and leave feed??? ya'll sleepin on rap