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08-29-05, 09:17 PM
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Life Riddles
IP: 7D8B DD8E
Life Riddles (A Gangsta's Life)
Very Deep Emotional Shit www.soundclick.com/ax don't worry, I don't have many tracks so it will be easy to find it, and this way you can see the lyrics too @ Lyrics/Story lol plz lay ur thoughts links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205660 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205660
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08-29-05, 11:39 PM
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
Uppin..........
c'mon feed me with your knowledge
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08-29-05, 11:48 PM
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IP: 641D 2876
The quality was off, your accent is thick in a couple parts
it sounded like you was "mumble mumble mumble bitch" like you forgot the words or something Then you can tell you was reading Memorize your verse next time, it'll help you put more emotions into it cause you'll have the rythm and feel already down Then it'll make doin adlibs easier Turn your vocals up cause the beat drowned out other parts I've heard worse Perfect your delivery then worry about adlibs, the adlibs were a little much 5/10
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08-30-05, 01:53 PM
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IP: 452E 0970
aight, thank you... pc
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08-30-05, 02:07 PM
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IP: 6A5F 5C42
not bad
your flow wasnt perfect your addlibs SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME You'll be spittin and it'll be like "WHYYY DIE MOTHERFUCKER" I thought I was being cursed just from listenin to ya shit. lol but yo, Imma tell you how to do ya addlibs when you record your vocals, make sure that they are atleast, ATLEAST 2.5 db higher then the beat. and when you mix it, and edit them, make sure you dynamic process them as thumbass or w/e when you do your addlibs, make SURE that they are atleast 1.5 LOWER then your vocals. and when you dynamic process your adlibs, make sure you use..uber-punch. that'll make it sound better. now, to what you was actually sayin, I have no clue. I DO know you were rappin though, and I didnt like your flow its like what the other dude say mumble mumble muble BITCH!!!! So work on that too.
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08-31-05, 01:34 PM
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IP: 452E 0970
Aight... thanx anyway.... lol
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08-31-05, 02:08 PM
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IP: 641D 2876
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lol@me being a dude -Storm
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09-01-05, 06:35 PM
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
^^^^ what the holly fuck?
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09-01-05, 06:56 PM
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IP: 4F4E F91D
Iite my dawg peep this, work on yo flow, hit them beats good, dont mumble and that thing about ure adlibs will help drastically trust me, ok work, keep at it kid youll get it dawg.....rtf to my track "2 minutes left" its in tha sig wun
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