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Old 08-23-05, 01:16 PM   #1
Dizzee Rascal
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So you didnt know?

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So u didnt know..
My immaculate speeches stay in track with my thesis
Harmonic demonic style, that infact melted my preaches
Many see this, my speaches blemish on the pull of a lever
How time perish at my fist, the way i always end-ever/endeavour
Forever bliblical, 2000 years mimical, i gimic my luck
Stuck in a ritual, i appear so digital, radio's cant pick me up
Although physical, role reversin reference jay just one try
My flow lyrical, weeps diversion my direction let the song cry
An affection of perfection, cut the emotion wiv a knife
Motion everytime i reach perfection i look back on my life
So i stife,So if you didnt know, then why should i?
Why should i try to abide to survive as the forts i combine
My fears n tears alligned blueprint my whole souls design
Why should i even pick up a pen
Maybe cus it attracts foxes to my cocks
Like kidnapping a hen?
Or maybe it saves me on an intellectual level
Stearing an unknown soul away from peril?
A concluding alliance, the obience makes my gut fatter
But like disproving science, it doesnt seem to matter
So u win some u loose some, where some choose to sin
Im at the point of my life, where everytime i loose i win



Chea' ill edit in the links soon enough
Dont sleep on this this some real shit for u now
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Old 08-23-05, 01:17 PM   #2
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U knw what I think of this, OM of the month for reel
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Old 08-23-05, 03:42 PM   #4
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this was very nice piece, had off the chain multis off the chain vocabulary...the bad structure didnt even matter cuz it still had good flow....very nice man keep it up deff. o/m of the month!
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Old 08-23-05, 05:37 PM   #5
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Thanks ye i get what ya mean about structure yo but i feel thats irrelevant to flow ya know??
Def appreciated
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Old 08-23-05, 08:19 PM   #6
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Old 08-24-05, 08:35 AM   #7
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Voted on all the aboves that left feed pieces
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Old 08-24-05, 11:10 AM   #8
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this is a well deserved Om of the motnh foreal verything was on point keep it up man
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Old 08-27-05, 09:52 AM   #9
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U should actuially nominate if thats the way u feel
Thanks for the feed def.appreciated looking for more feed
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