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6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-05 at 10:31 AM

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shodown has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:32 AM.

You ain’t got the balls or lyrical stamina. This gon be an Eazy KILL.
I’ll murder you, your wife, and kids.SHIT YOUR FAMILY call it"Amityville"
I’m the type to cut my hair funny and worship a 3 Stooges statue.
Spin my head counterclockwise and spit green pea soup up at you
Shave my ass crack with a Norelco, and glue the hairs to your chin.
Pass you off as Osama bin Laden, and collect the award for capturing him.
I’m down to ruggedly bump uglies. My ass to your face.
Give you a taste of the shit I talk when I’m belligerently rockin’ the place.
I’ll stomp on your grave and hump that fake angel on your tombstone.
Punk Kelso from That 70s Show while we smoke 2 bones ‘til we too stoned.

hahaha


KOOL lets GO!!!!

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Malicious. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:39 AM.

dont write it homie BLINDSPIT THIS SHIT...........

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hahaha....ya had to dig all that shit up huh...just too hit me good.......


nice drop........


ok lets get them votes in...

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Voted For: Malicious.

shodown...what the fuck are you thinking? You'll probably disqualify this, so I'll make it nice and long: what in the fuck are you doing? This must be some kind of mix-up and you thought this was a 'throw as much random shit as possible in and hope people mistake it for a punch', because I ain't seeing you being serious in this situation. Though Malicious didn't come that hard at all, it's pretty easy to say who this went to, mainly because he wasn't messing around.

Mal.'s good lines

Mal's bad ones
When he was messing around

sho's good ones
...

sho's bad ones
I'd rather and not copy and paste the whole thing.

I have no clue what sho was thinking, but he wasn't trying or needs to stick to topical.



How would his family call it something if they were dead?

Malicious had punches and personals, and a bit of wordplay, but shodown just went for something like comedic value or was just being a dumbass like I do. Mal's verse was better, shodown: elevate or leave. Your record is worse then mine. :\

Voted For: Malicious.

Ma vote Goto
Malicious.

He Had better punches
also he used name play
used personals
flow was nice

shodown verse was nice
but i thought the punches was played
flow was decent but still need elavation
no personals

so ma vote goto
Malicious.

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you murder him....C's Up all day...werd

Ha word...upping for some more votes..................

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Voted For: Malicious.

shodown's verse was funny but not "ha ha" funny. its as if he was talking all that garbage to make up the line limit or something. i ain't hating at all cos i ain't got a problem wit shodown but i really feel his verse was lacking real punches and actual creativity. he tried humour with the 3 stooges/ pea soup line but it really didn't work too tough. and that line about sticking your ass hair to the other guys chin was just the kinda shite that an 11 year old would come out with.
Shodown you need to come with personals next time, and improve your creativity and vocab, and start using multies, you've been here long enough you should have a fair idea of how to start using them

malicious had a basic verse as well but he had quite a few good personals in it so that basically won it for him IMO.
that was funny the way he used shodown's quote against him, and there was a fair attempt at word play with the "wack and you know it" line.

so v/malicious

RTF please :

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2488942

Voted For: Malicious.

This could be a good battle smf?..but who the fuc is shodown..
Trying out for TL..thinkin your good..But your ass got HOE'D-DOWN..
4...aah,don't use links in punches,and the punch could have hit harder.
Trying out for every clique,To bad for C.S Your in there crew
Quote:
Originally Posted by shodown
Please let me in TL..i know i need elevate
yes it true
6....good personal
Time to get to work
You say you a writer / poet..but your wack and you know it..
Now everyone in rv Can see sho,
Get his neck slit..and his skull split,like i got a worker's permit
3..meh,wasn't feelin this...seemed more like threats
Everyone knows Your the biggest crew hopper RV Has ever seen...
Cus the only time sho gets 'down',is when he has a wet dream
5.....decent
Why dont you 'sho'your records..is it that bad..or is it so-so?
Smf sorry to put 'down'
But with a 2-10 record i would have left rv along time ago..!
3....punch need better wording..and i wuzn't feelin the intial usage in the set-up.

You ain’t got the balls or lyrical stamina. This gon be an Eazy KILL.
I’ll murder you, your wife, and kids.SHIT YOUR FAMILY call it"Amityville"
1...this didn't diss malicious in any way
I’m the type to cut my hair funny and worship a 3 Stooges statue.
Spin my head counterclockwise and spit green pea soup up at you
1...this didn't diss malicious in any way
Shave my ass crack with a Norelco, and glue the hairs to your chin.
Pass you off as Osama bin Laden, and collect the award for capturing him.
2....osama lines are played
I’m down to ruggedly bump uglies. My ass to your face.
Give you a taste of the shit I talk when I’m belligerently rockin’ the place.
1...this didn't diss malicious in any way
I’ll stomp on your grave and hump that fake angel on your tombstone.
Punk Kelso from That 70s Show while we smoke 2 bones ‘til we too stoned.
3...meh...weak.

One-sided..
Malicious...
Decent spit.Next time,try to aviod putting links in battles,people just hate to click on those.The quote punch u had was the best one IMO.Some of ur punches could have hit better wit wording..but...it was still good.
Shodown...
WTf @ all the threats in ur verse.I bassically got bored during it.Sayin ur'll murder his family and call it amityville does NOT diss the oppenent.And sad thing is...95% of ur verse was made up of threats.

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