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SICK.I.AM SPITS FIRST
PEI SPITS SECOND
WYTE KNYTE SPITE THIRD
MYSTIC CHAOS SPITS FOURTH

....SO YEA LEAVE HARsh feed, its our first audio as a crew outside rapverse

I have left feed on Implicit Be you
and UnF Ghetto Streetz

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Wasn't feelin it the quality isn't good off beat no offense u know just given u real talk feedback so just leave some real feedback some of the verses were good but the recording sound was bad

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1st dude...needs to work on flow...its not horrid...but it could be touched up....also his presence isnt too good...kinda goes in and out...

2nd dude...flow is ok...but falls off at a couple points....delivery is better than first dude..flow falls off kinda bad right before u say..."my lyrical flow"

3rd dude...flows ok....delivery is horrid...and presence really isnt there...bring more excitement to the mic man......

4th dude...flow isnt too good...u got kinda of a robot flow...its really choppy n stuff...presence isnt great....bring more excitement too...gotta feel what your saying man....put emotion into it

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^ thanks for the feed man.. appreciate it

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thanks for the feed yo....uppin

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all basically have the same problems.

so up your emotion. really. like a lot. you have to or else you'll all sound like some R2-D2 rappers.

flow is choppy. in many places, not just one particular guy.

^^thanks a lot yo


uppin i guessssssss

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alright first up honestly aint too great....you need too up ya shit a lot......your lyrics are pretty bad.......2nd person is a lil better....your emotion needs too upped...lyrics are decent........damn upp this up a bit......3rd up you need too up your shit a lot at first you sound like u were tryin too do a hook you sound like you scared of the mic......4th you need too upp your emotion a lot......your lyrics are "ok" at best....u need too up ya flow cuz its boring...this track makes me wanna yawn fams up the flows i know yall can do this shit ya'll sound like me when i first started i can tell ya'll new too it.....so up and drop some more lets see what else u got
Overall-4.5/10

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My Music HOE

thanks yo uppinl.............................

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Hmm.......I listened to this Is This Your first yu need to basically do what these ppl sed upp ya flow n put some emotion in make the listeners want to listen on or they may jus turn it off in the middle of the track you have a long time to work on it tho so jus keep on elevating........One

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OYD MAFIA

thanks man....werd up 1.

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