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10-24-05, 03:39 AM | #1 | ||||
I'm Back HOEBAG
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some multies i guess
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i cant rock out or block out any of her physical features
blivital creatures we must be too trust thee girls dont love thee they love the checks n there humvee they want you dead filled with led in a body bag we need u out the building before ur killin u copy that living a sinful live filled with porno n murder and lust but after the time you hurd the stuff bust who do u trust? i can tell you one thing to bring nothin but bling cuz u like girls with blonde hair with long legs who sing and all they want is ur money so funny cuz u love um and try bein as sweet as honey so trust me get outta the siutation before the intoxication of marriage cuz your bank account numbers really what u should cherrish nah i dont mean it its god you should trust number 1 savior he can changer your act even through some criminal behavior http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2506522
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10-24-05, 07:48 AM | #2 | ||||
Hell yeah
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make you a deal, your missing two links, so leave feed here while i leave feed on your OM
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212502 anyway some parts didnt seem to make sens, i never really liked multis tracks cuz i feel like if i was typing anyway that was rhyming together you know what i meen, structure is not bad, flow is so-so at some places, overall not bad man, just aint feeling multis you know what i meen, peace out bro 7/10 |
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10-24-05, 08:52 AM | #3 | ||||||
Light Weight
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even as an athletic child you couldn't be energetic and wild rund touchdowns and search grounds of success
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10-24-05, 12:54 PM | #4 | ||||
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Drop two links or this will be closed
*Moved*
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10-25-05, 08:41 AM | #5 | ||||
Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 3240 794D
i wasn't really feel'n the wordchoice here
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