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Old 10-24-05, 03:39 AM   #1
JRoy
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some multies i guess

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i cant rock out or block out any of her physical features
blivital creatures we must be too trust thee
girls dont love thee they love the checks n there humvee
they want you dead filled with led in a body bag
we need u out the building before ur killin u copy that
living a sinful live filled with porno n murder and lust
but after the time you hurd the stuff bust who do u trust?
i can tell you one thing to bring nothin but bling
cuz u like girls with blonde hair with long legs who sing
and all they want is ur money so funny
cuz u love um and try bein as sweet as honey so trust me
get outta the siutation before the intoxication of marriage
cuz your bank account numbers really what u should cherrish
nah i dont mean it its god you should trust number 1 savior
he can changer your act even through some criminal behavior


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Old 10-24-05, 07:48 AM   #2
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make you a deal, your missing two links, so leave feed here while i leave feed on your OM
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212502

anyway some parts didnt seem to make sens, i never really liked multis tracks cuz i feel like if i was typing anyway that was rhyming together you know what i meen, structure is not bad, flow is so-so at some places, overall not bad man, just aint feeling multis you know what i meen, peace out bro
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Old 10-24-05, 08:52 AM   #3
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Old 10-24-05, 12:54 PM   #4
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Drop two links or this will be closed

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Old 10-25-05, 08:41 AM   #5
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i wasn't really feel'n the wordchoice here
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