aight yo me and implicit are makingthis a track but yo he is takign too long, LOL and i was bored so i finished it myself but STILL BE ON THE LOOK OUT OF OUR NEW SONG, he will have done the chorus and second verse so yup

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212209
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212398
^^tracks ive listened to

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=268333
^^my link

tel me what you think

this song will be getting played on my local radio station unless the one i make with iMplicit is doper

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Implicit as in clear? or the cat on RV

neway


I like the beat...


everything could be amped...your levels were proportionate...But, they were all low

shit should have been bumpin in my headphones


flow is good

when you started rappin..."everything you come on stage"..w/e ur flow kinda stuggled for a tick..Yea, I'm reachin


nothing really major one way or the other

I think flow wise this was nice...BUt, as a "single" I don't think it's catchy enough...the Hook is well done, but too complicated...I personally believe hooks should be repetitive, almost liek chants...that's what make them catchy

sometimes simple is better


quality is good...but again, levels can be amped


energy remain consisten throughout = good


good track


7/10

damn man i was done yesterday.

anyway. beat is dope. yessir.

vocals are too low. up that a little. would sound much better.

verse 1 - probly my favorite verse of the whole song. your flow is real cool. stayed on point the whole way. lyrics were cool. voice is intersting.

chorus - dont like this too much. i like what you're trying to say though

verse 2 - your flow started falling off. didnt like this verse at all cause thats where im supposed to go

last verse - umm not really sure about this one. its like between the first and second.


overall this was cool. just up your vocals so we can hear it better. and return the feed by clicking the link in my sig.

yea word i this aint gonna be no single, LOL ROFL
i just put that for more feedback, LOL and yea i fucked up on my vocals, fuck
im gonn ahve to re-record this shit
fuck
or i can just record over my vioce one more time......not sure

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aigh yo i need some more feedback

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Hmm...Beat Is Dope Ya FLow Is Dope In The First Verse seems to really b hyped up on this 1st verse like the delivery....good jobemotion is good,lyrics i like the hook if it is a hook lol doesnt stand out really you should put a chorus 5 voices harmony that would make it doper
2nd verse i like this a lot keep on the flow better emotion seem to still b hyped up lol..........werd @this its dope 8/10 Good Job Keep Up

Rtf On Me N Intermentals-This Life Plz Thx

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WTF?
did you even listen to the song?
i highly dount it becuase there if 3 verses not 2.

you better leavesome real feedback

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Yuh I Did Liten...........i Jus DIdnt Leave Feed On Last But I Will If U WantIt's Cause I Didnt Like it As Muxch

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damn that was my favorite verse but no body likes it, LOL funny how that works
it dont matter, its up to you i htought you iddnt listen

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my boy smitty got skills with them beats... i hope u paid him for this if u talkin bout it being a single..... flow is on pretty well for most part, falls off a few times, delivery is cool... lyrics are ok.. after verse 1.. your flow just goes all over the place n u loose your energy

I Did Listen That's Y I Sed Bout The Hook N Stuff I Swear I Listened

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yo leady, i didnt pay him shit, LOL and im gonna re-recored it becuase i dont like how it sounds, and no i didnt pay him shit.....wtf, this aint gonna be my single, LOL its gonna be on my mixtape tho...i just siad its my single so more peopel will lisyten


uppin

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still, its going on a CD, therefore you still need rights to the beat

no....not for a mixtape

i can use any beat wtf and it says you can use a beat for your mixtape.....LOL yup yup

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