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Old 11-01-05, 07:36 PM   #1
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RV's 1st father-son collab, werd

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me n ThatN*gga, i had that neva scared shit frum b4, but i got him on it. n werd, im hiz dad, he my son, u know

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210088
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210219

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Old 11-01-05, 07:38 PM   #2
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werd pops lol..................leave some feed yall
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Old 11-01-05, 08:33 PM   #3
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Kool B:

Flow...was jerky and choppy at the end rhymes...I know what u were tryna do, but had you switched it up and continued the lines on a few bars, it would have been pulled off better


Presence is good on track



That Nigga: flow is actually pretty good...fell off in 3-4 spots...work on bein more consistent throughout the track



not great..not bad fellas = decent



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Old 11-02-05, 02:56 AM   #4
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Flow...was jerky and choppy at the end rhymes...I know what u were tryna do, but had you switched it up and continued the lines on a few bars, it would have been pulled off better



lol, yeah mayn, there wuz this 1 part, i kinda fucked up a lil, like i dunno, wen i sed tha werd it didnt come out right, but i liked all tha rest so i sed fuck it n left it, u know, werd
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Old 11-06-05, 12:08 PM   #6
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lmao at father son collab, i wuz expectin some bridgin the gap shit n i get this haha
listenin...
bone crusher beat n hook is hot
transition from hook 2 verse sux, u need to come wit some loud in ya face crunk shit if u gon use this beat n hook
hook again, sounds like a completely different song
2nd verse same problem, but this fits better than the 1st verse
song's not bad, 6-7/10 i'd say
lol the hook comes in again, i thot this wuz over
ok, now its over, still a 6-7/10
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