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Old 11-18-05, 03:10 PM   #1
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Exclamation Intermental feat. Gutta - RAW (this shit is hot)

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tracks called "RAW"

1st verse: Gutta
2nd verse: Intermental

the first joint of the "Soul Rebel vol. 1" mixtape...pretty hot shit..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214665
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213578

I BEEN AWAY FOR A MINUTE..IM BACK

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"RAW FEAT. GUTTA"
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Old 11-18-05, 04:16 PM   #2
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Old 11-18-05, 04:16 PM   #3
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Ite, The intro is cool man, I like the beat it its nice to the song. Verse 1 was delivered well and flowed well in the beat, propz. I don't really like the sample in between the 1st and 2nd verse. Inter, your verse is good, it was agian delivered and flowed well. The last line ends the verse well, but agian i don't really like the sample at the end.

Overall i'd give it a - 8/10

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Old 11-18-05, 04:18 PM   #4
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not bad not, Gutta came out nice, his delivery was good and as was his flow. decent lyrics but was kinda cheap in a way. not bad though gutta. Intermental i thought you did pretty good man, one of my favs by you actually. Your delivery and flow was pretty much perfect. lyrics we're fa sho tight. beat is all good but overall I liked this. not quite on my list but it's gettin there.

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Old 11-18-05, 04:21 PM   #5
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word I feel u thanks for the feed...............
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Old 11-18-05, 05:37 PM   #6
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beat is ill, love the sample at the begining, damn gutta is dope, nice flow,lyrics are cool too so props to guttas verse, inter what hapened to the quality? i dunno its fucked in to my speakers anyway, nice flow man, nice lyrics from what i can hear, beat is ill, overall dope track both of ya
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Old 11-18-05, 06:01 PM   #7
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This was pretty good. Gutta you came out and your flow was tight and so was the lyrics. Good Verse. Intermental your lyrics fit very well in this.. I thought your flow went off cause u was doin sum type of stop and go stuff on your verse, but like I said the lyrcis was good. Your vocals were a lil high but great quality in this. 9/10
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Old 11-18-05, 06:08 PM   #8
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listenin...
piano beat comes in, grimy n hot
sample, goes well wit the beat
rap starts, great quality n good lyrics
sample again, it wuz ight the first time but it def isnt hook material
2nd verse, quality isnt as good
liked gutta's lyrics better, but both verses are good
hook/sample again, really doesnt fit nemore

overall i'd say its good 8/10
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Old 11-18-05, 06:32 PM   #9
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hot drop niggaz...

9/10.. fo show
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Old 11-18-05, 08:24 PM   #10
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Gutta - Had Presense , Flow was there..the only thing i see bad about this guy is his content was kidn of Generic..i Admit i do that sometimes to..but still his verse seemed a little bit to generic for me..

Intermental - Pretty Nice..Content was better than the first guys...presense was okay kinda didnt understand you at time and your flow went off in only one spot i heard...imcorperate some more vocab and multi into your shit and i think it will be FIYA...

Beat- was okay..not really feeling it..i like the sample at the begginging but it needs real hook...

Overal - 6/10
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Old 11-19-05, 06:32 AM   #11
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Yeah

Gutta-Nice Lyrics But They A Bit Like Mainstream...You Know i Not Into Mainstream Good Flow,Nice Delivery Emotion Is Dope

Inter-Word@Your Lyrics THey Are As Dope As A joint....Flows Nice Falls Off A lil But You Came Back On,Emotions Nice Deliverys Nice(As Always)....I liked Your Verse betetr More Real I'd Say N The Lyrics Were Doper lol

Hook-I Actually Liked It,Could Have Been Imrproved A Bit Though

Nice Track

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Old 11-19-05, 08:14 AM   #12
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nice piano drop...good come in man...decent lyrics..good flow..voice is hot..

2nd dude..decent come in..voice is ok...flow is nice..the verse hear my words fucked up a bit..lyrics is hot tho man

over all nice track..plz RTF
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Old 11-19-05, 09:16 AM   #13
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beat is pretty decent

I liked the intro

Gutaa...ur voice is distinct...and ur flow is good...but something is missin in ur vocals..it's almost as if they lack presence a lil


Inter...vocals came in a touch louder than Guttas...I was feelin the flow...but the whisperin kinda flew by me...cudn't make it out


I've always thought ur delivery was nice


solid drop yalll...jus short


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Old 11-19-05, 11:27 AM   #14
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beat is nice

gutta ,flow s gd...everything on point

inter, like speats said something s wrong with ur quality,
but flow is kl

hook is dope
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Old 11-19-05, 11:31 AM   #15
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thanks yall..............rtfin to u and cho-khan now
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