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^^ the devils reject Tf Ghost




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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2544419
intramental and..

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

1st off, RTF please on my track with Ecko


beat struck me as 90-ish when it came on = not bad

there's a constant hiss in the background...dunno if it's the track or the vocals...either way, it's noticeable

1st cat...flow is good...appropriate for the beat...delivery cud be better to make vocals more discrete...it was tough to dicepher some lyrics


2nd cat...quality was better...flow was pretty cool...nothing major either way


this was a decent track yall

vocals on the outro came in loud


7/10 drop


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

lol @ lyrics...funny shit....

beat kinda old school n shit....
your flow fits it nice

try using a more ab ab flow...like not necessarily on this beat...but in the future...try practicing that...just so the flow can get more consistent....

delivery is already pretty nice...u dont need a whole lot of upping with that...your energy is pretty good...

one thing i notice you dont add hooks a lot in your songs though....practice your hooks...and really the key to em is simplicity....keep a hook simple...im just saying that cause you dont seem to add a lot of hooks....of course i havent listened to everything youve ever recorded either lol....

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