check son

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

checking in....

Punching dope is simple to most people, I can too
N it's easy to Killa...kid in PLL that's as wack as you


drop early man

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Ya kin's nothing but failures,so let's hope your the last crop
cuz your family is full of more scrubs....than a craft shop

Hmm, close battle here, tough call

Vaskez, I felt yours was just too simple. The concept was good, but I felt you could have done more with it. NK, the scrubs wordplay was decent, but the flaw was that you said his family rather than him which makes the punch a bit more indirect. Either way, I felt after thinking about it, NK's just hit harder and was meaner.

Vote - NK

Played concept vs Meh nameplay..

Uhhh...

Vote: Meh nameplay (Vaskez)

You guys made this one tough man, damn. Uh, Vask punch was simple, but it was also fresh. never seen it before, and the set-up for it was dope. NK had a decent concept, decent wordplay, iunno though I wasn't feeling the wording. And vask had that more appealing RB style to me. But Vask used one of those i'll beat you type lines, i'll kill him so bad, i'll whore em so good that, wtv, you know what I mean. But also the you got more.... then a .... type line is also crappy. Omfg, this one is tough to call. Well also, NK is battling Vask, not his familly, so it's inderect but still a good punch imo. Iunno, I have to go with Vask on this, wording, direct. That's what won it. REAL CLOSE though, and good battle here.

NK, for the next thread you make, make a new thing "Battle of the week" that'll be cool. Like have the top.10, but put battle of the week on also. Base it on dopeness of bars and closeness in vote count. Or do it hwv you want, it's your mag. lol, pc my homies

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v/vask

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Punching dope is simple to most people, I can too
N it's easy to Killa...kid in PLL that's as wack as you

is a decent punch here but the nameplay is basic
even worse is that the rhyme scheme is so simple which u usually accomodate for with a dope wordplay but here u used a statement as an opener and a killa play as your punch

Ya kin's nothing but failures,so let's hope your the last crop
cuz your family is full of more scrubs....than a craft shop

your punch is pretty good as well, using a family concept into a comparison punch
the rhyming was more than one syllable which is good, no real personal but then again this is Punch line league so it dont matter

^^^
*this is the most explained vote Im dropping this week*
v/ NK punch had more to it, good battle still

aight thanks for the honest votes

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Vaskez - did not like your punch but it was ok, nothing that I thought was very good about it or made it effective as a punch....

NK - I liked your punch, maybe you could have worded it a bit better, but I liked the wordplay and it sounded a lot witter than Vaskez'...

Vote - NK for a better punch

v/ NK.. very nice wordplay.... vaskez.. liked urs too but a bit too simple
nice battle

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v/nk, werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

This was a weak one both had ight lines.....vas wat happened u can drop better than that...Nk....u came wit a harder hittin one...V/Nk

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