http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218669
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218655

Ite...thought i'd post it up....my second song in the game,

Ite holla.....want some critique to improve so go craaaaaaaaaazy.

I will RTF.

Song called ''The Beginning''

www.soundclick.com/kamze

beats ight...............listnin....................qual itys prett bad yer voice is really low
and flow is off in places lyrics souind nice from what i can hear of em
deleivery is kinda lackin hook is nice like tha lyrics im new at audio also so werd keep droppin youll elevate
rtf on my new track feat unf called fukk a herb

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Hmm Used this Beat lol

Qualitys better tahn before but its stll bad

flows koo


delivery needs uppin

lyrics are nice

emotion needs workin on

get confident on the mic

Wow@hooks quality compaerd to other lol

2nd verse

flows worse...


same as first verse exept flow....


Hook its dope

use hooks quality in verses homie


overall:5/10

work on ur delviery quality n emotion homie

Pz

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