armagedon is comming world is ending
pictures of steel and airplaines bending
lending out hands to family and friends
how could it be this world has to end
army with tanks gun's and grenades
children playing throughout second grade
head decapetaded blood spewed from legs
letting out screams aganey prairs and begs
little tinny baby with brother disfigured by blades
how the world end armogedons begining today
fire starts spewing from skies no longer blue
how could this happen happen to you
belive it aint fake imagined it's true
meteors sparking starting the fuse
life has just end which once started with you
parted from few love ones and friends barried them two
gun's going off scream's echo loud all of the few the good and the proud
now take my worning i told you the truth now we is dead no more of abuse

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This was an aight piece. Some parts i liked. My favorite bar was the first one:

armagedon is comming world is ending
pictures of steel and airplaines bending

I thought that was pretty cool. The vocab in this was ok and the flow was a little off in some places. The imagery was pretty good though. Keep writing tho, i'd give this a 5/10. Please get at any of my links in the sig, if u havent already. Thanks.