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01-20-06, 02:26 PM | #1 | |||||
in your system
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In The Midst Of Chaos, ft. OSB
IP: 9E2F CDE8
this piece is dope, read it....by OSB and Drakel
Uncontrollable chaos is brewing upon the darkened sky, A burst of hope? Only Kirk is close when the stars collide, Though to most, doe and clothes is the real thing to master, Me and Drake are oh so broke still overseeing the pasture, A symphony unclouding the veils that faking made, Washing away the fables and lies like a breaking wave, Angels crucified... Whos alive to do the stride of greatness, Chew the lies of stupid guys and move aside the fakeness, Prove inside the pages is a symphony of noise, Here to rebuild everything that publicity destroyed, Fly to God... Although they say that the skies the limit, I'm already flying in it so its time to defy the odds. heavens on edge, skies venge, clouds vomit descending through the darkness streak two crowned comets cause amidst all the choas, we kiss death on the lips and stare eyes fixed on the oncoming eclipse a light in the mist, missed by the overwhelming anger we fail to see peace only assists compelling more danger swelling fists persist, demand my growing need to advance theres no telling what dwells in these hands if i took the chance i stand still, feeling chills escape down my spine its too to late to change, my fate already found its time i was designed and created, made for only one purpose berate straight into chaos, and see what emerges there's no denying the urges, i've been trying for ages but when i defy destiny, thats whats scribed into pages im faceless without a cause; a makeshift with more flaws but when the stack is un-even, thats how i beat the odds its because i only applaud, to go along with the crowd i know when its my turn, the noise will be twice as loud in the midst of chaos, is where we become stable the tale of Drakel and OSB defines, yet exceeds a fable we are able in every way, poetry bleeds from our veins the world as our canvas, pens lead the campaign our methods arcane, leaving most competitors stubborn we never concede a challenge, but why fight each other? i dont trust violence, but it hides in us all inside every mind, there's a malign silence entralled like a calm before the storm, your mindset switches and the guidance you once had, now uncontrollably vicious but most are blinded to confide...it may be earnest an unstoppable fury, can be optimally harnessed see, every storm has an eye, guides and controls its course but you dont know where it'll form, until you're taken by force Drakel and OSB: we are The Storm....take cover while you still can. ____________________________________________ links:
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE Last edited by Drakel : 01-20-06 at 02:29 PM. |
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01-20-06, 05:38 PM | #2 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
Well thats cool. Leave feedback, you bitches.
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01-20-06, 06:04 PM | #3 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: 67C1 99DE
Fuck you cunt sore. Ima read it after dinner and leave your queer feedback. This better be a good read or ima be pissed!
Be back in like 30min.
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01-20-06, 06:09 PM | #4 | |||||
P.S.A**DYNASTY
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IP: 8630 C252
nice drop..................
structure was perfect.................................. it flowed nicly for a text piece............................... imagry was fucking dopeness best ive seen inna long ass time in text................. lyrics were obviously sikkness too u guyz werk illy together this is tha first text piece ive read since i started audio and its illy,,,,,,....................wish yall did audio rtf on one of my new trax in tha song forum please and thank you illy drop 10/10 pure genius
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01-20-06, 07:52 PM | #5 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
yeah, i'll get to it after i eat, if i don't, just pm with or something, word
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01-21-06, 03:10 AM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 31C2 62EB
Where the links hoe.!
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01-23-06, 12:25 AM | #7 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
i think i leave feed on every OM in here, so, yeah
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01-23-06, 01:37 AM | #8 | ||||
Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP: 3240 794D
Dat murfukka hot, I like how both of yall went punch for punch in yo verse.
tha drop is great...(Drop meaning Structure). I would like to c more collobs like this one. Yall keep ya minds open an ur heart focused, an I'm sure yall both will make it somewhere.
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01-25-06, 05:48 PM | #9 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
wtf................
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01-31-06, 12:19 AM | #10 | ||||
Ike
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IP: 3053 F660
LMAO @ the unknown dude......wtf kinda feed was that lol
structure was good of course... i REALLY liked OSB's part.....both were dope...but i was really liking the multies, and inners to go along with em...shit was too dope....wish u could put that over a beat.... you 2 work really well together.......first time ive read text on this site in a long long time....and apparently its not too shabby...really i dunno what else to say...i enjoyed reading it....good job to both
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02-02-06, 04:42 PM | #11 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
thanks... anyway... um.. feedback?
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02-06-06, 05:47 PM | #12 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 96FF A98D
shit dat was hot...yall really do work well togetha...and tha best part about it is dat i had a beat in my head and not one bar was off beat...dis is a fuckin sick piece...rtf in my shit...easy
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02-06-06, 11:07 PM | #13 | ||||
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IP: 31C2 62EB
Word up homie this shyt was fiyah i was really feeling this you had nice emotions and good feeling in your peice.. your structure was on point ..and so was your whole concept was very creative.. Nice job.
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02-10-06, 01:00 AM | #14 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 903F 26CB
good shit, nice vocab... very consistant flow... thoght it slipped in spots a lil bit towards but not at the end... around the Crowd, loud, part... but than you picked it right back up... really felt the lyrics in this... nice way to convey your thoughts... hott drop... keep doing ya thing both of you...
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02-10-06, 08:07 AM | #15 | |||||
Black Poet
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IP: 860D ECBB
Been meaning to drop feed for this for a while..
This was dope,.. really nice vocab,.. flowed really well.. the imagenry was nice. really solild drop stay up both keep em coming. 1~ |
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