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01-28-06, 07:11 AM
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New to RV
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nothing special
IP: 5AAD C88E
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...556#post2635556
Im wearin all black with the cover up hoody on Black gloves, skimask caryin a police batton// Im ready for all niggas wid problems Like exedrin for head aches,Ill solve em// Im back up on my feet ketchin up on my grind If the cops come,we know who dropped the dime// Pullin triggers and bussin heads Turning smart niggas into speds// Whats good homie, whats the deal I'll put the gun to your face,hows it feel// Im out on the block with nothing but the heat Got a gun that will blow you on your back and off your feet// Eff what they say bout me,None of its true I been tottin pistols and fightin sence the age of 2// You queer ass dudes are turnin femenin Get the word,Get my boys together and start sendin them// If you aint feelin my flow than thats your opinion But disrespect what I say and ill kill you,I aint kiddin// Last edited by Yung Wun : 01-28-06 at 08:16 AM. |
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01-28-06, 06:16 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
kk was feelin the flow a little, but u need some mutlies. and need to step up on the story factor. cus u were bouncing every where. i liked the part where u said
"Whats good homie, whats the deal I'll put the gun to your face,hows it feel" that was good. besides that keep it up. S to the Z. ps. b more realistic. |
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