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03-10-06, 06:33 AM
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I don't lose
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day after day....not my best so let me have it.....
IP: 9C2B 06EC
lookin for good feed to improve this song...cuz i want it on the album...but right now its not worthy.....
DAy after DAY - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3616787 linkssss - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3616787 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223650
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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03-12-06, 12:41 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
uppin....lookin for ways to make this bettter.....alot better
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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03-12-06, 02:12 AM
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Broke as hell
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IP: BF52 4920
i like this..the beat is cooll...
good lyrics and flow and what not.....nice quality as well..what you use? overall i like this man......chorus could be more dynamic...but dope track...
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03-12-06, 03:00 AM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 60C0 4289
pretty good...good beat...good lyrics....pretty emotional...got a lil eminem feel to it...7/10
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03-12-06, 03:43 AM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
Sorry, I don't feel like goin through sound click right now, fuckin slow shit. But I'ma tell you that you shouldn't ever think your shits weak. Always know you came out hot everytime, then your shit will come out tight.
-Paranoid
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03-12-06, 09:12 AM
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New to RV
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IP: BC1E 0233
Beat is aight. Ya quality could be a little bit better, sounds like ya vocals need to be turned up a little. Delivery fits the mood that the beat creates. Pronunciation could be a little better, towards the beginning you said something I couldn't make out. Flow's aight. Could be better in some places. Yea your vocals need to be turned up in some places, the beat turns up but ya voice/delivery doesn't increase. Good shit
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