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02-20-06, 11:21 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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FINAL VERSION!! HOP ON In ft. Re'Von
IP: BACC 8E92
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3529865
its fire baby you leave feed i leave feed GET AT IT -- Links ===== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222812 ======== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222546 checked Last edited by will appear : 02-21-06 at 02:16 PM. |
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02-21-06, 07:32 AM
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Ms. Get Gully
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IP: 8980 B838
wow actually pretty nice...i can hear this bein played on da radio..but take that as a compliment the girl singing is dope she gotta nice voice..your flow was nice delivery was killin this IN a good way tho..im feeling the lyrics as well tho..u did the beat justice...i like the chorus as well...i dont wanna play around i wanna lay you down lemme show u things u neva done girl just hop on in ..yeah very catch chorus feeling the end when ya both repeated the hop on in part that was a nice addition .. i appreciated the feedback and your song is great no B.S. good listen...Uppin for more Replies
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02-21-06, 12:45 PM
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IP: BACC 8E92
thanks a lot ma
 but the singer is a guy |
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02-21-06, 12:58 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 8299 D979
Aght
Past: Good Lucks,Nice Flow,Deliberys Dope For This Track,Lyrics Are Nice For This,Its Original Lyrics For The Topic,Im Suprised,Presence Is Dope,Suits It,Liking The Quality Damn,Really Good Shit..Feeling Your Presence Hook........Dope! That Girls Dooope!!! Your Second Verse Is Nice,Flows Switched Up,Deliverys Koo,Lol@Bake A Cake Line,Lyrics Are Straight,Like The End Of Your Verses With The Lil Talking Hook.......... LMFAO I Thougth It Was A Girl  Lol Well Hes Dope! Good Track,Keep Up!
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02-21-06, 01:00 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
word up soon as you got somthing you know what too do just send me the link
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02-21-06, 01:01 PM
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Ike
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IP: 3053 F660
id say before you sent it into the radio...line up your stacks at the beginning a lil bit better....take a lil reverb off....
and at the beginning when your flow...when your at the point when your like..."undressed and your ready"...when you drag em off past the snare drums...make it a lil more smooth...its may be the stacks...im not sure....but it seems like u rush those a lil bit.... good track though....presence and delivery and everything is nice....its a good song...def. could be heard on the radio...id say send it in
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02-21-06, 01:02 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
word thanks a lot man
just like i said too unf once you got links send me those |
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02-21-06, 02:00 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
aight i'm uppin on this
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02-21-06, 03:34 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
Uppin Again Come On Peeps Dont Sleep On This
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02-21-06, 08:47 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
Uppin This Again Come One!!!
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02-22-06, 01:43 AM
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L.E
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IP: 4F84 8C0F
Listening...
Beat is nice... The singer is a guy..? o_O Sounds like a chick man. But it sounds good. Flow is pretty nice. Hook is nice. Quality is ill. Good shit, keep it up. |
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02-22-06, 05:53 AM
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Herb
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IP: 5773 B703
aiight the beat sounds like U compressed the f**k outta it..um delivery is average lyrics r average emotion could be slightly better um flow could be upped riding tha beat is fine presence needs work emotion needs work production could be better
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02-25-06, 05:55 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
aight good looks i'm uppin
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02-25-06, 05:56 PM
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Ike
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IP: 3053 F660
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02-25-06, 06:30 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
alright i'll do it now
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