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Old 05-27-06, 01:41 AM   #1
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Old 05-27-06, 02:03 AM   #2
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Listening beat intro is cool...i always liked ya voice .........plus im feelin ya quality these days thank samson.......ya verse is nice but seems like im listening but not capturing what ya seeing .........hook blends a bit guess we both gotta work on that this beat is def ridable u doin it too over really nice track i like it lil laggin with tempo but good to see you doin it diff
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Old 05-27-06, 11:32 AM   #3
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Yeah...I like to lag a little on slower beats. I just like the way it sounds...lol. Anyway, thanks for the input man.....always appreciated
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Old 05-27-06, 12:06 PM   #4
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beat is slick...feelin it

ur flow is kinda knockin on this...like it


need a tad more presence...I listened to this through my stereo speakers...a lil more UMPF in ur presence would set this off


I could tell when the hook kicked in, but needed a tad different vocal delivery to set it off from the verse...

This was a slick drop tho...


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Old 05-27-06, 07:11 PM   #5
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Word.....thanks for the feed fellas
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Old 05-28-06, 01:16 PM   #6
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Old 05-29-06, 05:43 AM   #7
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like how beat come in...

you come in sick..poison word line was hot..flows illl man...hardest par line nice..multis r sick...lyrics deep..good writing here..hooks kinda low..nice nice..

nice multis again man..ur writing here is great...deepness...delevery is good..if i'd havta pick @ anything, would be emotion...

hooks nice...

like the no chain no grill line...like the government line too...

this shit was real good man...
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Old 05-29-06, 01:37 PM   #8
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Word.....thanks man. And I'll RTF or suck a dick !! like your sig says.....lol
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Old 05-29-06, 08:05 PM   #9
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actually heard this couple days ago at work lol.

beat is cool, iono where you find these freaken beats lol.. you agen with ur multis.. have no idea how u think of so many rhymes lol.. flow is good, lyrics is very original. Im luvin how u made the tittle out of this song. Very original bro nice job. vols are good, just up your EQ alittle, and ur voice will stand out alot better. props bro

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