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Old 05-28-06, 01:07 PM   #1
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33. Butler (0-0) vs. 34. Faime S. Quotez (0-0)

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Old 05-30-06, 10:20 AM   #2
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Old 05-30-06, 03:53 PM   #3
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checkin in , good luck ...
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Old 05-31-06, 04:51 PM   #4
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listen ,

when the clips n shells flare, you'll run for the fence n yell scared
ya bars not clean, only time 'butler seen fresh' is on the 'prince of bel-air'
you really a don? please, leave , you shittie, get bombed easy
i'll end your career on the net, and since you a butler..
..........................................while you gone, go get me a martini.
silly, dont spar with me, dont need to prepare for sonning this kid
got text to 'put the whip to but' quicker than 'parents punishing kids'
tear ya lungs n ya ribs, leave any dude close to me floored, doc
i mean ....why am i serving you? thats supposed to be your job!
ya not dope as me, whore stop , i'll pop it n leave em dead
beam on the mac's like 'traffic lights' better 'stop when you see that red.'
ya drops are just weak, inbred from wack, throw fist n strike teams
you're unappreciated, only time 'dudes care to see but' ...
..............................................is when 'chicks got tight jeans.'
fifths ignite fiends, with text, i'll instantly own this queer
thought you'd win,
now you must watch defeat 'fall on ya, but' like 'sitting in broken chairs'
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Old 06-01-06, 09:56 AM   #5
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son.

"Go make ur bed. cleanup the floor. pickup ya shoes 'n ya shit.."
^i took the words right out ya moms mouth,
.....to make some extra room for my dick
you haven't finished ya name. cuz MAD doods spit the same way
i suggest u change it to Faime S. QuotesbyotherRappersOnButlerNameplays.
the names Faime.. . I talk about guns. im so dope that it hurts.
i dont realize that typin a buncha filler in this line right here
................................................<then doin that for flow doesnt work
boy, ill uppercut ya mug to deep 9. wit this hawk that im holdin,
ya head'll b so suspended in air, ...theyll probly b talk of expulsion
I called in a team of detectives. i had to inform them of the problem commin.
the mystery of ranks has got us baffled. but, we'll make sure u get to the bottom of it
our only lead is the box office. we're told that this garbage mc,
was probly the worst thing to happen to RV since the opening of mission impossibl 3
Ima bash ya head in. Stop ya heart. shit, this herbll b doomed.
the winners 'clear'.. an so is wat the docs'll be yellin in the emergency room.

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Old 06-01-06, 12:09 PM   #6
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faime s quotes

when the clips n shells flare, you'll run for the fence n yell scared
ya bars not clean, only time 'butler seen fresh' is on the 'prince of bel-air'

^^ok..

you really a don? please, leave , you shittie, get bombed easy
i'll end your career on the net, and since you a butler..
..........................................while you gone, go get me a martini.

^^realize these butler lines are played lol this wasn't to good

silly, dont spar with me, dont need to prepare for sonning this kid
got text to 'put the whip to but' quicker than 'parents punishing kids'

^^err ok

tear ya lungs n ya ribs, leave any dude close to me floored, doc
i mean ....why am i serving you? thats supposed to be your job!

^^lol another butler line..ok

ya not dope as me, whore stop , i'll pop it n leave em dead
beam on the mac's like 'traffic lights' better 'stop when you see that red.'

^^this was pretty cool..old tho

ya drops are just weak, inbred from wack, throw fist n strike teams
you're unappreciated, only time 'dudes care to see but' ...
..............................................is when 'chicks got tight jeans.'

^^ok

fifths ignite fiends, with text, i'll instantly own this queer
thought you'd win,
now you must watch defeat 'fall on ya, but' like 'sitting in broken chairs'

^^decent


butler


"Go make ur bed. cleanup the floor. pickup ya shoes 'n ya shit.."
^i took the words right out ya moms mouth,
.....to make some extra room for my dick

^^aight lol funny

you haven't finished ya name. cuz MAD doods spit the same way
i suggest u change it to Faime S. QuotesbyotherRappersOnButlerNameplays.

^^ha lol

the names Faime.. . I talk about guns. im so dope that it hurts.
i dont realize that typin a buncha filler in this line right here
................................................<then doin that for flow doesnt work

^^ouch

boy, ill uppercut ya mug to deep 9. wit this hawk that im holdin,
ya head'll b so suspended in air, ...theyll probly b talk of expulsion

^^dope

I called in a team of detectives. i had to inform them of the problem commin.
the mystery of ranks has got us baffled. but, we'll make sure u get to the bottom of it

^^lol

our only lead is the box office. we're told that this garbage mc,
was probly the worst thing to happen to RV since the opening of mission impossibl 3

^^ok

Ima bash ya head in. Stop ya heart. shit, this herbll b doomed.
the winners 'clear'.. an so is wat the docs'll be yellin in the emergency room.

^^cool

that middle section was murder...butler took it with that ...faime s. quotes you gotta realize that most of your personal hits most people seen before..if your gonna diss a person be a little more creative...nice attempt you got talent..but butler showed his dominance

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Old 06-01-06, 02:59 PM   #7
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please, that was a keystyle. didnt think But would show!

nice verse Butler!!
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Old 06-01-06, 03:10 PM   #8
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silly, dont spar with me, dont need to prepare for sonning this kid
got text to 'put the whip to but' quicker than 'parents punishing kids'
tear ya lungs n ya ribs, leave any dude close to me floored, doc
i mean ....why am i serving you? thats supposed to be your job!

overdid the nameplays

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"Go make ur bed. cleanup the floor. pickup ya shoes 'n ya shit.."
^i took the words right out ya moms mouth,
.....to make some extra room for my dick
you haven't finished ya name. cuz MAD doods spit the same way
i suggest u change it to Faime S. QuotesbyotherRappersOnButlerNameplays.
boy, ill uppercut ya mug to deep 9. wit this hawk that im holdin,
ya head'll b so suspended in air, ...theyll probly b talk of expulsion
Ima bash ya head in. Stop ya heart. shit, this herbll b doomed.
the winners 'clear'.. an so is wat the docs'll be yellin in the emergency room.

Ouch at some of those lines.

Butler killed it here.

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Old 06-01-06, 03:13 PM   #9
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you really a don? please, leave , you shittie, get bombed easy
i'll end your career on the net, and since you a butler..
..........................................while you gone, go get me a martini


vs

called in a team of detectives. i had to inform them of the problem commin.
the mystery of ranks has got us baffled. but, we'll make sure u get to the bottom of it
our only lead is the box office. we're told that this garbage mc,
was probly the worst thing to happen to RV since the opening of mission impossibl 3
Ima bash ya head in. Stop ya heart. shit, this herbll b doomed.
the winners 'clear'.. an so is wat the docs'll be yellin in the emergency room.

v/ butler clearly
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Old 06-01-06, 03:33 PM   #10
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"Go make ur bed. cleanup the floor. pickup ya shoes 'n ya shit.."
^i took the words right out ya moms mouth,
.....to make some extra room for my dick
called in a team of detectives. i had to inform them of the problem commin.
the mystery of ranks has got us baffled. but, we'll make sure u get to the bottom of it
you haven't finished ya name. cuz MAD doods spit the same way
i suggest u change it to Faime S. QuotesbyotherRappersOnButlerNameplays
boy, ill uppercut ya mug to deep 9. wit this hawk that im holdin,
ya head'll b so suspended in air, ...theyll probly b talk of expulsion

Vs.

A bunh of OK butler Nameplays...

overall Butler got this pretty easy, wwayyy too much nameplayin Faime S, one or two is ok, but you just went over tha top, plus alotta of them were played... much respect to both emcees...

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Old 06-01-06, 06:58 PM   #11
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when the clips n shells flare, you'll run for the fence n yell scared
ya bars not clean, only time 'butler seen fresh' is on the 'prince of bel-air'
you really a don? please, leave , you shittie, get bombed easy
i'll end your career on the net, and since you a butler..
..........................................while you gone, go get me a martini.
silly, dont spar with me, dont need to prepare for sonning this kid
got text to 'put the whip to but' quicker than 'parents punishing kids'
tear ya lungs n ya ribs, leave any dude close to me floored, doc
i mean ....why am i serving you? thats supposed to be your job!
ya not dope as me, whore stop , i'll pop it n leave em dead
beam on the mac's like 'traffic lights' better 'stop when you see that red.'
ya drops are just weak, inbred from wack, throw fist n strike teams
you're unappreciated, only time 'dudes care to see but' ...
..............................................is when 'chicks got tight jeans.'
fifths ignite fiends, with text, i'll instantly own this queer
thought you'd win,
now you must watch defeat 'fall on ya, but' like 'sitting in broken chairs'


VS.

"Go make ur bed. cleanup the floor. pickup ya shoes 'n ya shit.."
^i took the words right out ya moms mouth,
.....to make some extra room for my dick
you haven't finished ya name. cuz MAD doods spit the same way
i suggest u change it to Faime S. QuotesbyotherRappersOnButlerNameplays.
the names Faime.. . I talk about guns. im so dope that it hurts.
i dont realize that typin a buncha filler in this line right here
................................................<then doin that for flow doesnt work
boy, ill uppercut ya mug to deep 9. wit this hawk that im holdin,
ya head'll b so suspended in air, ...theyll probly b talk of expulsion
I called in a team of detectives. i had to inform them of the problem commin.
the mystery of ranks has got us baffled. but, we'll make sure u get to the bottom of it
our only lead is the box office. we're told that this garbage mc,
was probly the worst thing to happen to RV since the opening of mission impossibl 3
Ima bash ya head in. Stop ya heart. shit, this herbll b doomed.
the winners 'clear'.. an so is wat the docs'll be yellin in the emergency room.

FAIME.= You my dawg and all...but your lines were kinda played and also your lines were stretched as well man...some nice quotable lines but it seemed like now enough!.


BUTLER= Wow a real one sided verse man...your verse connected very well with hitting him hard and serving him right man!..a real nice eveolutional verse against FAIM nice connected punches and wordplay!
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Old 06-01-06, 07:15 PM   #12
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tear ya lungs n ya ribs, leave any dude close to me floored, doc
i mean ....why am i serving you? thats supposed to be your job!

vs

"Go make ur bed. cleanup the floor. pickup ya shoes 'n ya shit.."
^i took the words right out ya moms mouth,
.....to make some extra room for my dick
you haven't finished ya name. cuz MAD doods spit the same way
i suggest u change it to Faime S. QuotesbyotherRappersOnButlerNameplays.
boy, ill uppercut ya mug to deep 9. wit this hawk that im holdin,
ya head'll b so suspended in air, ...theyll probly b talk of expulsion

Butler had some nice lines, but overall it was a one sided battle here..

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Old 06-01-06, 07:50 PM   #13
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obvious who the winner is, no need for an explanation really. i'll just end up quotin all the same lines everyone else already has

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Old 06-02-06, 10:27 AM   #14
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butler killed. quotes had every played butler nameplay ever. nothing was original at all. on the other hand, butler came with some really dope shit. some fresh concepts and that took the words outta her mouth line won it for him alone. this was onesided as hell.

V/Butler by murder

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Old 06-02-06, 11:12 AM   #15
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not even remotely close...
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