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Old 06-25-06, 03:09 PM   #1
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A few days ago something happened, that made me kind of realize what I believe, this spawn of that.

Dear Lord - Sense


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Old 06-25-06, 03:29 PM   #2
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Aight listenin..damn what beat is this?...intro is good..im feelin the singing..whoever it is..ooh ure quality is nasty lol...but i cant hit that nigga so ima continue...your flow is decent and multis are straght and the lyrics good..BUT the shit u gotta work on is the emotion, summ shit jus seem u readin nah mean...and not rlly feelin the words all the time...and hook is real nice, i like you put a spin off the oringal hook from sum1 else on a diff beat...if you had the quality this song wud be 10 times better..emotion is better on 2nd verse..but thats it:

emotion and presence thats all u gotta work on

delivery, flow, lyrics are all nice
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Old 06-25-06, 03:35 PM   #3
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LOL yea i've always had a problem with emotion..i have it in the first take, then something goes wrong, i leave, come back, try it again and lol i keep messing up til i get annoyed and the emotion dissapears...most of the time i'm not even reading i'm just annoyed as fuck...lol..ill work on that...
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Old 06-25-06, 03:38 PM   #4
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Lol word that shit happens to me too nah mean but overal shit was solid so its all good but yeah def work on that n itll be hot..1
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