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Old 08-07-06, 01:54 PM   #1
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featured track: Back Witta New Track Must Peep!!!!!!!!!

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Ah'ight yall heres a new joint for ya boy Trip...peep it, enjoy it, leave da kid some good feedback....1


Song Title: The Three P's

Completely Performed by: Triple N

Beat By: Rockitproductions

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hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4286969&q=hi
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4286969&q=lo

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Old 08-07-06, 02:25 PM   #2
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i told you what I thought yesterday. but I'll peep again

beat is fuckin' ill as fuck. First verse is ill. love the flow you used. that speedy shit is ill. change up is dope for it too. tight delivery and emotion. Hook is tight. lol @ 3 p's. ill shit. drag on playstation ill. nice flow on 2nd verse. be easy adlib nice. overall flow on this verse hot. volume is like perfect too. hook again is ill. damn this beat so ill. lol didn't expect this beat to be used for track like shit. but what you did with is ill.
like how you started 3rd verse. Dope shit. nice flow and emotion overall

overall this track was tight. nice lil jam. like the triple_N anthem. lool overall shit is pretty dope. good shit man. 9.4/10

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Old 08-07-06, 03:49 PM   #3
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beat is pretty cool
unique track
flow was switched uip throughout whisch was cool
deliver was mad cool perfect for the track
cant point out anything i didnt liek really
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Old 08-08-06, 04:15 AM   #4
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lmao pizza pussy playstation

beats nice

flows cool

topic is original

nice track fams keep droppin
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Old 08-08-06, 04:43 PM   #5
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mixing sounds diff....i dunno...sounds a bit weird to me for some reason...

flow is ill as shit...story is coo so far...

lmfao @ hook...coo shit....i like the reverb on the "pizza, pussy, playstation"...sounds good.....

lmao @ this dude being like the stereotypical dude...and it ending up being u lmfao...

beat is coo...shit would knock in a club...lol overall...good concept..im likin this...good shit
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Old 08-08-06, 05:59 PM   #6
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Listen'n

Beat sick as hell... rocketit on point son

1st: Lyrical content extreme...feelin the way u came off delivery
Hook: Dope Pizza pussy PLAYSTATIONNNNN lmao....ridiculous
2nd: tops first verse fo'sho.....delivery presence dope fam..
hook: Same
3rd: Started off like Tech9 - The beast lol...its gravey though thats what u remind me off... you got crazy lyrics dog

Over-all fam dope track....8.5/10 good shit keep it 100 dog.....holla at yo boy 1


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Old 08-08-06, 07:17 PM   #7
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Listened to 3 Ps


Beat is a touch generic-ish...but it works

ur flow is good and the rhyming is quality...HOwever your delivery on the 1st verse was bland because you repeated the same rhyme scheme throughout without many variations in your pitch/tone


hook sounded cool...and was mixed well

vocal quality is good...if a tad loud...(decrease by .5-.75 decibels)

Verse 2...lyrics did not hold my interest...but the mechanics of the verse were good (i.e., flow/delivery)


This is a hype sounding track that was well done.


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Old 08-10-06, 06:13 PM   #9
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Thanks for all the feed yall......1
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Old 08-11-06, 11:44 AM   #10
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hahaha..triple_n


you suck..i dont like the beat..you had a bad ass flow...your voice is wack!hook is bad as hell..lyrics are bad..get a new mic like mine and u cud have a better quality...emotion is just off place...delivery is so so bad...boy go and elevate!































































































































































































































































































now u know i meant the complete opposite of all that!


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Old 08-11-06, 05:13 PM   #11
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^^^^^LOL! I see you got jokes huh? ah'ight I got you..>WATCH!!!!!lmao
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Old 08-11-06, 06:00 PM   #12
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Listening...

Beat is interesting...really like the orchastrial strings on it.

Flow is nice and quick...really liking it. Fuck I love the way you mix your shit. It sounds so professional.

LOVE the hook. Thick and dubbed wickedly.

Love the bridge in there. Pizza, pussy, playstation haha...Nice.

Awesome track man. Keep it up.
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Old 08-12-06, 12:49 AM   #13
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beat is on some rockit productions shit lol. its aight.

aight.

verses were good. lol. weird song yo.. goofy ass nigga. . you polished already. only thing i dont like is the cadence you put on some words. but it dont really affect ya impact on a track. ya reverb sound a lil loud. that and flow seems a little mechanical sometimes. like its programmed, yah'mean ? like you aint human lol. kinda freaks me out. its good, but very different yo.


overall i think this is a good track. replay value, eh dont know if i'd jam on this joint while in the whip or when im just chillen lol. unless im playing my p2s and eating my pizza while tappin some ass.. then this would be my anthem, yahmsayin!?

smooth shit
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Old 08-12-06, 02:22 AM   #14
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nice track.

flow was pretty cool.

fast rapper. pizza pussy, fuck the playsation.
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Old 08-13-06, 02:01 AM   #15
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Lol. You remind me of Tech N9ne in this track. Like Crazy lol but thats a good thing.

The beat for me is off the hook, it's simple, but still sick.
1st Verse : I love the flow and you stay on point through the whole thing.
Chorus - LMAOOOO, oh man you mind if i dl this and show it to my friends ? lmao..they would love it.
Second Verse- A little flow switch, but i love it, keeps me interested and a few quotables, lyrisc are straight.
Chorus - Again..LMAO..lol Three p's..my new anthem.
3rd Verse - The real Tech N9ne feel comes from this. Specially the first part because you kill that stop and go flow. Great Job.

I personally lvoe this track.
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