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08-15-06, 01:06 AM
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"What;s Golden Remix" - Paranoid, Enygma, And LE
IP: 2EF1 1720
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
Word...a pretty tight collab that's taken a while to get done, thanks to me. But I finally got around to it. Verse 1- Paranoid Verse 2- Enygma Verse 3- LE Word...leave some links and the favours shall be returned. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233275 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233177 |
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08-15-06, 05:16 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
first verse paranoid????
sounds like le? idk wtf lol gotta thick accent that i dont really like lyrics are pretyt cool flow isnt necesarily off but it doesnt really flow smooth i do not like the hook fuck i hate it when ppl ask me to leave feed when ive been drinking that would be stanley playing on your page not the golden track damn ok flow was cool voice is cool no really hard punches idk pretty cool verse i guess lmao at walk through ethiopia wiht fries and a big mack lol cool flow smae delivery emotion cool shti lol le your flow idk isnt really that smooth to me lyrics were cool id give it a 6/10 "walk through ethiopia wiht fries in a big mac"
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08-15-06, 12:37 PM
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IP: 2EF1 1720
Thanks. Up and away.
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08-15-06, 01:54 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
willa it's not a battle track it's a remix, it's mainly a lyrical track.
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08-15-06, 11:24 PM
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L.E
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IP: 2EF1 1720
Damn...what can a couple of guys do to get some feed?
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08-16-06, 05:08 AM
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IP: BB77 E4BA
HAHA i frikkin love the original J5 tune
beats always bin nice....... paranoid- flows nice...lyrics are kool for the tune....the delivery's quite monotonous and gets quite repetitive quickly though....doesnt sound too bad but it'd be more interesting switchin up abit every now and then.... enygma-okkk, im feelin the way ya come in....soundin reaal comfortable on this...flows almost effortless...deliverys hot....yerr dope verse...cant crit much bout it lol LE-right...flows nice...damn im feelin ya delivery nd emotion.....soundin nice nd cocky haha....LMAO at the lyrics aswell..."i show her my socks and boxers nd she lifts her blouse" lmaoo....yerrr nice verse yerrrrr dope track yo 
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08-16-06, 09:21 AM
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IP: 8C96 3502
1st MC - flow is robotic....but nice lyrics.......delivery is strate.....quality could be upped a bit.......overall strate verse....
2nd MC - came better than 1st nice delivery, real energetic...lol at da Big Mac Line.......nice flow......overall strate verse.......Came the best out of all MCs Hook - get's point across 3rd MC - lol at "get ya wet...ya girl wet":...flow is nice quality is crisp, but work on pronuinciation maybe it's juss da accent but some words i had to listen again to understand...........not bad...feelin how ya mixed ya part......... aiite RTF if ya could on: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233473 pz ~1~
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08-16-06, 11:36 AM
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IP: 3D05 A22F
1st dude - jeeze could you show a little emotion please... lyrics we're alright i guess kinda hard to follow when your flow is montonous
2nd dude- hahaha ollddd schoool sounding flow, love it... but the lyrics is are sooo basic lol if you work on em you'll be iiigght 3rd - well your flow was definately off on the breakdown, but its iight on the main sample... but still the lyrics are mad basic Overall a decent track, better than average i would say... but all three of you have shit to work on (as we all do but) *unfinished business*
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"Only god can judge me, but I'm atheist so you do the math..." Last edited by Willa : 08-20-06 at 03:07 PM. |
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08-16-06, 09:14 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
thanks for the feed, but yo ^ lyrics aren't hard to follow as long as the pronounceation is good. but good looks yall
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08-16-06, 11:24 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 2A9D B363
yo paranoid sorry to free post but is it coo if wanna yall peep my thread.........
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233473 thanx....... pz ~1~
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08-16-06, 11:33 PM
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IP: 3D05 A22F
It's really not about the pronunciation its about your delivery, the lyrics we're hard to follow because of the lack of emotion... its hard to stay interested
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08-16-06, 11:42 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
^yes and yes.....lol but man pronouneaction is more important then you think, would you wannna mumble lots. but the point is I'm workin on it, it's not that easy to over come. it's comin slowly to me. pretty much every track i get better
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08-17-06, 12:55 AM
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IP: 5043 32F4
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drop to yo knees hands back mouth wide open lolz jk anyway the first dude... pretty cool lyrics quality could be better tho...but its acceptable...atleast i can hear ya words pretty coo vibe... need more emotion tho the hook is pretty coo...didnt like that lil gap after the first verse tho... the 2nd dude is pretty coo kinda didnt hear in the 2nd line the rest is hearable flows cool im feelin that beat overall pretty coo trax |
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08-17-06, 07:15 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
^you didn't feed LE, oh well haha LE you sucka!
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08-17-06, 09:56 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3842 F0D2
typing as I listen....ok damn para comes right now...ok flow is better still choppy tho...ya still stretching ya syllables to hit on the snare...delivery was better but still on the monotone side....lyrics was koo nothign spectacular
verse 2...enygma coming wit the enyg speedy flow...flow is koo...aint really blowing me away but its on beat...it has a few shaky spots as well...delivery was kinda blan tho...I ono what it is but everytime I peep u ya delivery jus doesn't draw me in...lyrically had good amount of multies...more of a style over substance verse. Verse 3...ok came in a lil awkward...flow is on snare but not liking its rhythm with this beat...halfway thru, second half of verse flow gets on point better...sounds alot smoother....delivery was koo...best delivery on track....lyrics again nothign jumps out at me but decent...good drop.
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