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06-20-07, 08:57 PM
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New Jack
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love is a drug
IP: 8CD5 B31D
love got my heart hurting
love got my eyes bursting ...with tears cause i got love with fear not tryin to love cause she might not always be here but i got hope cause im addicted to her like a pheen is addicted to dope |
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06-23-07, 03:17 AM
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IP: 26FC 8E94
not as impressive as your other post in open mic ....i think it should of been longer ....i would have gotten more into it when reading it if it was longer ...the whole super short written thing just isn't cuttin it for me...unless its like a cypher verse lol....~1~ keep writing...
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07-02-07, 04:53 PM
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New to RV
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IP: C14E F834
i guess it was the only thing u were feeling when u were writin dis?? lol
kinda wway too short but i felt it sumwaht. i know what u pmean, but u coulda made it wayy better but its all coo. peace |
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07-24-07, 06:56 PM
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New to RV
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IP: DB1C 4B69
Not to imprest but if u made it more it would be really tight but its a decent but not great lil shot story!
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07-27-07, 03:59 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: DB1C 4B69
Borin to me it was WAY to short but i guess it was alright!
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07-29-07, 05:03 AM
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New to RV
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IP: D657 40A2
it should be longer..but its good
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