RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The block > Lyricist Lounge
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 08-30-07, 10:38 PM   #1
Kordozar
Gone
 
Kordozar's Avatar
 
Posts: 202
Joined: Dec 2004
From: Fifth Ave
Status: Offline
Text Record: 46-19
Please Tell Me This

IP: D924 CCE0

Who Won This Battle...Cats On Here Are Dick Eaters....



i call the shots like iowa bird gang, give you the silent treatment
call me the doctor, call you crazy; steroid discussions become frequent
sterilize the kordozone, realize that i remain atop the throne
the bronx is burning, but you wouldn't know remaining all at home, all-alone
times for you are hectic, damn right you lookin skeptic,
one more to kill, strike it off the checklist, i would expect it like a ban on wreckless
right or wrong, brains over braun i stay calm all along
you got tyrannosaurus arms, and dick lips like king kong
im the head of this bitch, meanwhile you can't even make it out the nostrils to climb
use your head, and make sure you don't hit it with the bottle this time

Or



Money Comes From Trees.........And Im Rich..................... So I Be Damaging Wood
On The Other Hand...Ya Bank Lacks More K's(0,000) Than The The Klan In The Hood
Scope On The Handgun Faggot You Can't Run Cause I Hit You From So Far Away
Leave Ya Body Stinking In The Woods.......Now Police Questioning Omar And Tae
King Of New York?Bull Crazy Tryina Win $50....You Up Against Me Ya Shots Over
Talkin Bout You Dealin White..............Dickhead Thats Was Really Ya Pops Soda
My Last Two Lines....Spitting That Shit You Aint Making Nowhere Ya Text Was Ass
But Im Glad You Went.Everybody Knows That They Always Save Tha Best For Last
__________________
"I'll Stay Asleep As Long As I Can Have You Right Here In My Dreams''
-R.Kelly



Send a message via AIM to Kordozar   Reply With Quote
Old 08-30-07, 10:47 PM   #2
Brother Anubis
Flyweight
 
Posts: 105
Joined: Aug 2007
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 2998 9024

both suck .
__________________


Hip Hop Cultures eternal
  Reply With Quote
Old 08-31-07, 12:51 AM   #3
La Cosa Nostra
Bangs like bikini attol
 
La Cosa Nostra's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,147,484,064
Joined: Aug 1986
From: Gaza Strip
Status: Offline
Text Record: 54-0
Audio Record: 5-0
Graphics Record: 1-0
IP: A4F6 D05A

Neither..

-1 for both of you
__________________
RIP jono, peace out bboy.
Pardon Canada Criminal Record Pardons Services Toronto
Send a message via MSN to La Cosa Nostra   Reply With Quote
Old 08-31-07, 11:39 AM   #4
Cola
Pushin it....
 
Cola's Avatar
 
Posts: 7,966
Joined: Nov 2006
From: Round tha way
Status: Offline
Text Record: 6-1
Audio Record: 1-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 04DF CD55

The second verus had better wordplay, if really any at all, but his wordplay had "ok"...and i say ok with a very big " ", but his wordplay had "ok" connection's....that was really the only thing going for either person, the first verus had a good flow and good words in the rhyme scheme that i thought were good, but as far as a good battle verus, the first one lacked alot of key points...

Vote: Second Guy
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lysol
But Eminem is the best.





Destroyin Tricks on the Daily


  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:26 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.