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07-12-08, 05:01 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Died in your arms (unmixed)
IP: E9A6 7493
didnt want to put this track up until i got it mixed or recorded it in the real studio but i thought id be there next week and it wont be until the week after. basically its your basic tragic love story. probably hard to hear the lyrics in this version so i posted the lyrics
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cf...endid=224599023 I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight She say she died in my arms, love choked her up then take a breather and fall back, its better for both of us I'm bout to die every night no time to open up and play this little games of why do fools fall in hopeless love see im a rollin stone, make every little hole my home no need for a companion, got barely enough to hold my own to roll wit me gotta sacrifice for this road we on loose ya identity, credit cards, and ya mobile phone and you dont want that, missin all ya family knowin if you talk to em cop's visitin ya family pickin at ya family, tryin to locate ya wherabouts the feds dirty, if they dont speak then they'll probably air em out thats orders being carried out, crooked cop 101 a fugitive, im used to this, exactly what im runnin from dont wanna have to go through that, the feelin that i hold u back its your choice, if you choosin the man then it aint no turnin back I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight, (Beleive that fore we leave baby we clappin at them) I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight, (We goin out like queen latifah set it off to the end) now i done told u then in and outs of my lifestyle you standin wit that look in ya eyes like you wanna ride out then get dressed and take this hammer from papa we headin for the boarder mama, hope ya spanish is proper you got me and i got you, no we aint bonnie and clyde but you say you ridin to die then ill be right by ya side bustin shots to keep alive wit my glock and my 9 we in the game until the buzzer nomore ridin the pine shaq and kobe the unstoppable, i bang on em you pop a few they aimin for my chick, sacrafice my body to stop a few i know you'd do the same thing, anything to maintain stability, its killin me, thinkin of ya body layed slain naw i aint havin that, we endin this where marriage at startin wit a ring and ima finish where a carriage at yea you heard me right, i aint quittin until a baby born im tryin to make you change from my shorty into my baby moms I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight, (Beleive that fore we leave baby we clappin at them) I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight, (We goin out like queen latifah set it off to the end) (Bridge) I keep lookin for somethin i cant get broken hearts lie all around me and I dont see an easy way to get out of this Now you done been down for a hot minute its exactly six months since you first got wit it well patience done paid off, we makin moves in a hour found a whole in boarder patrol, gone hop in the shower ima load the 45 make sure ya shotty is preped while you get ya body correct im re-supplying ya vest need a light load, which one u want, the nine or the tek you ready? then lets hit the road got twenty minutes at best this the start of somethin amazing, kingpins in the flesh we just a hopped fence away from being free to be us just me and my lil deviant chick, hold up i see lights we might just have to make a run for it and hope we be right now trucks come from everywhere, bullets wizzin past my sight i look back and see a few hit you so then i grab you tight ya vest has been penetrated, barely catchin oxygen i run into the crossfire so that youll be mine again I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight, (Beleive that fore we leave baby we clappin at them) I just died in your arms tonight, it mustve been somethin you said I just died in your arms tonight, (We goin out like queen latifah set it off to the end) left feed on Speats-Crying & Big Tony Self-Hip Hop lives ill edit links into my post http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=246798 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=246942
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07-12-08, 05:28 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 3103 24DA
This will be solid with some decent mixing. Even though the quality is shit, i can till hear a solid track in there, somewere. lol.
Learn to mix!!!! lol Get cool edit and Ill mix a few of your tracks and tell you the general things that need to be done to your tracks so you can learn yourself. |
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07-12-08, 05:39 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: E9A6 7493
lol yea ima probably record it on cool edit today. where would i send it?
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07-12-08, 09:37 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: B1F4 CD94
Judging from the lyrics this is solid nice flip on an old hook. When you put it on soundclick i'll download it.
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07-22-08, 01:19 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 24E0 3C56
listening sick beat,sick intro, its hard to hear your voice, you do sound a little monotone,cant really hear the words,id like to hear the mixed version..
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07-22-08, 01:30 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 24E0 3C56
just listened again while reading lyrics, when mixed right this will be a good song.
good shit
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07-22-08, 11:25 AM | #7 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 56DB FD7C
Listening: Love this beat damnn, Good intro, Kinda long tho till it begins, The flow is dope, you remind me of a famous rapper but dont remember who, Lyrics are cool, quality like you said is so-so but meh the track is still great, overall 7.5/10 grood drop homie
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08-01-08, 10:55 PM | #8 | ||||||
"Click Clack"
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IP: D3E9 C878
word, nice ish fam.. mix that ish correct though
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08-03-08, 11:09 AM | #9 | |||||
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IP: 611A A12A
pretty dope nitro. im impressed. i'd love to hear this track mixed properly my crhymie.
esvee, cee-ess
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08-03-08, 03:10 PM | #10 | ||||||
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This can be a good song
IP: 6409 9E54
This could be a good song. The beat and the lyrics is on point. Good job! The only problem is the mixing. At some points ya voice sounds muffled. But other than that it's great.
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08-11-08, 11:45 AM | #11 | |||||
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IP: 61C0 7C7E
^^^bumpin' for more feedback...
...the supe
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