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Old 02-21-09, 01:37 PM   #1
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Preseason: JTR vs Alphabetized

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Preseason: JTR vs Alphabetized

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Check by Wednesday 12:00 EST
Due by Friday 12:00 EST

Regular season starts Monday


This is the only week of preseason. After Sunday, regular season battles will go up. So be ready, and consider this your 'warm up'. If you noshow during this week, I will PM you after Wednesday if you did not check in, and ask if you still want to be in.

Topic: Penny Wish

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Old 02-21-09, 02:58 PM   #2
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Check, Good luck..

Fucking show...
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Old 02-22-09, 02:11 AM   #3
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theres no point
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Old 02-22-09, 07:35 PM   #4
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thats not the spirit....
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Old 02-25-09, 10:43 PM   #5
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Just gonna key somthing up real quick...

I go to work early in the day, working hard not to mention
I've already retired once and steadily collecting the pension
I failed out of college, so already blew that chance
no desk job for me, forever i'll be workin with my hands
And plans for the future are bleak, my healths in grave danger
Because everyday I build shit so hard it's like slave labor
But theres one thing that drives me, and I value above
It's the one thing thats certain to me, my girls love
So I do what I got to do, and I feed my own pride
Because the girl is my world and for her I provide
But inside I realize that I only feed myself lies
As I pull a shield of ignorance over my own eyes
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My penny wish is this, just a day off that'll pay
Cuz I wouldn't mind If I could sleep for the rest of my days
And I guess it works out great..
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Cuz the truth is blunt and reality just bothers me...
Cuz Penny's wish is I pass in my sleep for that insurance policy
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Old 02-27-09, 03:33 PM   #6
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He wished upon a penny... that when he found he felt lucky
He wished not for cars or jewels, he wished not for money
He wished for happiness, to always have a smile
To be respected, not neglected as someones bastard child
He was poor as shit and felt alone living in his orphanage
Surviving off of tasteless food and poorage sips
He never felt the feeling of being adored and kissed
And the closer he got to it the more his heart was torn to bits
But something happened when a couple passed in, looking at him
They had to have him knowing his smile would be contagious to a parent
They grabbed him, signed the papers & decided not to be short with the love
The warmth of his new bed was nothing compared to the warmth of a hug
He wished not for cars or jewels, but to always have a smile
And now for once in his life he felt safe and was finally a happy child
He put the penny under his pillow so that it could be safe too
He wished upon a penny... and all of his wishes came true
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