shiftin portrayed portraits of faces/
the unperfect picture left to be painted/
a devastated trail of minds ive recreated is yet to be debated/
a previously underated emcee tragically belated with blasphemy/
concieled by a mask of shadows/
am i speakin facts or fictionally puttin acts and shows/
ask and the answer you shall recieve/
sent peacefully but in an instant after opening,anger released/
leaving properties of mass deseaste/
awkwardly seated,there is no peace/
fore-fathers that proceeded to state,"equality will never be reached by these emcees"/
so seasons greetings id never decree,feelin completely at ease with these millamee's/
but are you feeling me/
if not, you will be guarenteed, no need to say please/
your death feaseable easily and id gladly squeeze/
with no second thoughts my subliminal plots dont tease/
demented mischieviously to the point that i ought to be committed/
but the committee just cant seem to catch me/
wit a straight jacket id lace up ya whole family/
now theres a sight for sore eyes to peep


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^^ tight very visual thoughts...at da begining n middle this piece has thought provoking content...tight, i like........ peace

thanx playa! same for ya piece too dawg...."very thought provokin" ill be lookin out for ya next post yo...

keep the replies comin ^^^^^^^

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tight
that shit was tighter than a virgin's ass!!!!!!!