Yup, I haven't posted on this form for a while so here is somethin' for yall...

Fertilize emcees take bullets to clear out their system/
Dissed ‘em with a bar just to leave ‘em lost in their rhythm/
Enigma for their puzzle solver, your problem are the two revolvers/
Keep sagin’ my pants, but the belt stay on my hip/
Like body fat on a 500 plus dude, Let shots rush you/
And make you move to Katmandu, while I move with custom shoes/
To kick ass of faggots so fuck them fools/
My rhymes be rusty but I dust them too/
Fall but rise back up like the sun do/
One two one two, any haters in site/
If so I’ll leave ‘em poisonous like venomous bites/
That’s why back in 2000 I stole the pen that Canibus used to right/
I start the battle but you refuse to fight, cause you know the outcome is you losin’ your appetite/
Bullets come up close to u like their magnified/
I ain’t Trick Daddy but I can leave your clothes so wet that kids can slip and slide/
Bystanders get victimized for what they witness from they eyes/

Holla back and let me know how was it...1

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it's kool... nice word play... you wanna battle

i like the flow to this piece

nice multi action goin



"Like body fat on a 500 plus dude, Let shots rush you/
And make you move to Katmandu, while I move with custom shoes

don't know but i like this line with the katmandu
shit must sound dope in audio

haven't heard some gangsta shit in a minute
overall nice piece


just work on them lines that be draggin and you'll be ight

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G.I. JOE

Good look G, and Huk'd on*FoNiKz* let's battle..1

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this was aiight for tightness un-tight-a-fied... illness in some parts, excellent vocab-er-ish, peace


signed,
~madd

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I liked the flow to it nice wordplay holla

set it up son