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IP: E83A DE5F
yo yo,
so you say my talents low, so is yours you cheap ass hoe, i be writin on the down low, while your stealing from eminem downloads, i mean its just a fact of life, that this your cross roads, you might turn out to be great, or not, but who knows? as for me i dont care, oh no wait i dont give a shit, so dont try and waste my time, go ahead and throw a fit, what you call that rhymin, cmon bitch gimme a break, by the time im done with you, i'll be doin you wife at your own wake. eat a kit-kat and shut up rahiem. |
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IP: 5153 3B92
what?!
yo yo yo that's the exact same thing i'm saying what is this you need to work on bar length, word choice, etc. just keep at it ~1~ |
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IP: 886A A593
it was alright...for a rhymester.
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