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Old 02-22-03, 12:55 PM   #1
Frozen Flayme
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what?!

IP: E83A DE5F

yo yo,
so you say my talents low,
so is yours you cheap ass hoe,
i be writin on the down low,
while your stealing from eminem downloads,
i mean its just a fact of life,
that this your cross roads,
you might turn out to be great,
or not,
but who knows?
as for me i dont care,
oh no wait i dont give a shit,
so dont try and waste my time,
go ahead and throw a fit,
what you call that rhymin,
cmon bitch gimme a break,
by the time im done with you,
i'll be doin you wife at your own wake.






eat a kit-kat and shut up rahiem.
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Old 02-23-03, 12:07 AM   #2
Aaron C. Vilyus
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what?!

yo yo yo

that's the exact same thing i'm saying

what is this

you need to work on bar length, word choice, etc.

just keep at it

~1~
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Old 02-23-03, 02:52 AM   #3
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it was alright...for a rhymester.
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