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Salvation Army
IP: 1819 6011
LET ME INTRODUCE 100% OF JUICE THAT GETS LOOSE; A STAR
BURST FLAVOR; CALL ME A ROOKIE, BUT NOT A HATER / I LISTEN THOROUGHLY TO THREADS FROM COMMARAD M.C HEADS NOW OR LATER; NOT SELFISH IN BEING THE BEST; I KNOW MY FLOWS ARE SIMILAR TO DA REST IN THIS FREESTYLE NEST/ I WORK AND PRACTICE AT IT; DON'T QUIT OR EVEN GROW TIRED OF MOLDING THIS ART WORK OF VOCABULARY OUTBURSTS DAT GOT ME FREESTYLING TO GOD IN CHURCH; KNEEL DOWN AFTER A GOOD SESSION; CANT STOP THE URGE AS I TAKE A BATH BUSTIN RYMES AS THE WATER HITS MY BACK/ EVERYTIME I HIT A PUNCHLINE, IS LIKE VOLTRON FORMING; ATTACHING WORDS TO MY MIND; STUCK IN TIME WHEN I FORM DA NEXT SIGN TO BEGIN FOR DA FIRST TIME/ LIVE ON AN OPEN FORUM; I FLIP A DIME AND CALL TAILS AS IT HITS GROUND TO SEE IF I WILL BE GOING UP OR DOWN/ DON'T MATTER SINCE WE ALL HAVE TO CLIMB THE LATTER; I'M STILL IN SECOND, BUT I GOT TO HEAD HOME AS I BATTLE SHAWN AND RAZOR RAMONE IN THIS MAIN EVENT/ NO THRONE INVOLVED; ITS ME THE HOST LOOKIN AT A FLOW WATIN TO GET SOLVED/ WHO MADE WHO, WHERE IS THE TRUTH; CANT SEE ENOUGH; ALL RIGHT ITS COOL, BUT WAIT WHEN I RISE AND STAND IN FRONT OF DA BOOTH/ I'LL BE SPITTN WORDS; SO FREE TO SPEAK MY MIND; LOOK AROUND FOR AN ASSASIN COMING BLASTING FROM BEHIND/ WHAT MY TOPICS SEEK IS TO DESTROY THIS LIE; OUR STARS AND BANGLED BANNERS ARE CREATING WAR FOR GREED/ ITS TIME NOW I FINISH TO LET YOU KNOW WHY I REGISTERED; TO FEED OFF OF M.C'S DAT RESPECT A MANS WORK INDEED; DATS WHAT I ASK FOR; HELP TO THE RYMELESS POOR TO SORE HIGHER TO THE ENDS OF THIS POLITICAL FIRE DAT ENGULFS THE EARTH AS IT GROWS TIRED..... |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
not 2 shabby 4 a beginner,expected nuttin less from ya first drop,real simple as far as skill,n wordplay r concerned,but had a good point 2 it,n flowed good,so keep workin at it,u'll fidn yo groove,stay up,1
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Special thanks
IP: 1819 6011
I appriciate what you think about my work. i respect you and
all that treat me the same way. |
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