wrote this one tym hopefully it'll get some helpful crits.

my feelings for you strong, so un percieved
you're that light on the flame hidden so deep..
without u im weak, honey my heart feels so lonely
i wish you could swim in my sea and see what i see..
believe.. you're what i breathe
what im here for, what i wake for each day..
promise me you'll stay and never betray
your ways are engraved, on my heart a tattoo..
physically and mentally ill show love for you
hold me in your arms, emotionlly subdued..
never confused never cold nor used
without you i'm help-less almost incomplete
as if i were a jigsaw u'd be my last piece..

words can't express what you mean to me.
these words can't express what you mean to me...