Deep thoughts, inside hell's box is da cause/

Don't no if i should press start or pause/

Cant applause, waiting for the mouse , noises in my house/

Arroused by chaos and mayhem, open gap space like strahan/

Stuffed inside my own mind , deaf and blind pitted/

Its a sign of the crime committed, armbarred submitted /

Head splitted, i lied when i know i did it/

Their can be no peace, no cure for da desease, /

Nothing stopping this force, homicides dat increase/

No pain or ease, brain frosted wit freeze /

Deadpool rises as the people live on their knees/

Land for lease is killin trees that help us breathe/

Feel dat heat, coming from da beast , white devil's meat/

yeah Deadpool filled like bags of kandy from tricking us treat/

Left silenced wit no beat, i unleash thunder to da streets/

System has me running, Devils stuck to their seats /

i like this, it took a while to get the flow going, but vocab was good......keep it up

yeah nice vocab and i like all the different messages you send.

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oooooooo! this is one of those complex ones... what I mean by that is that the messege isn't exactly clear, the rhymes where sort of simple, but like I just said the overall messege is a bit unclear... I started reading it and I just kept going cause it looked interesting... shit was pretty dope, pretty short though, good flow too...

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