10 - 15 bars

no crew votes no hate votes and no d/r.

lets go

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iight checkin in. whos spittin first cuz i dont have a lot of freetime on my hands and i prefer that you would get at me on aim or pm so this can be done by sunday.
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Ayo...

Fully loaded clip ready to empty six all in your grill like toothpicks//1
Causin a mix of emotion and friction with no lotion and crush this cracka like a ritz//2
You'll be catchin all my hitz throwin fits like a child does an out~burst//3
Your goin out first, i dont care what people say i can out live this death curse//4
While your life's gettin worse, your wifeys gettin hers from me in tha backseat of your GT//5
And people say they aint afraid of dizzy d, i get down like a busy bee//6
Pass my breakin point yesterday at three, so fuck a ko i want this battle to have a fatalidy//7
Make you in to salad meat, better add this defeat to your sig and let everyone know on rb//8
Dizzy aint playin no more, violently shattering happy thoughts directed//9
I'm undetect so this surprise is not expected, took my metal bat and nicely connected//10
I made your head crack and trifected, now its infected with a dent from tha second hit//11
Go crawl to your house why you neglect it, dont come back for more or i'm a start to disect shit//12

When the Glock sparks
Watch molten lead rip your flesh into two parts
Half & Half like hermaphrodites
You wining
That’s like bulimic white girls taking rapid bites
Only thing Dizzy about D
Is your Dick from anal insertions
This isn’t The Eminem Show
But dog I’m tell you straight up its Curtains
You thinking “How am I gonna let Vanilla Ice diss Me”
Maybe you should change your name to Ja
Cause dude all I smell is pussy
You got merc but a Fat White Boy
Go ahead & expect defeat
Your skills remind me of Cassette Tape desks
Your shits obsolete
Like Hillbilly’s with mullet hairdos
You aint nothin but a premo bitch
Watch me transform into R. Kelly to scare you
Then at the same time defecate & piss on you
Take you out like that gas station sniper
Challenge me?????
Dude this aint no 8 Mile cypher
I’m a grown ass man
You childish like diapers

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vote=dizzy d.


dizzy d, came better i think. Plus master blaster loses points for the blatant jack move.(see line #10, he recycled the line," ya friends like, 'how vanilla ice gon' diss you'" from 8 mile. That's not even a little clever, dogg. other than that, both verses were alright. I was no where near amazed truthfully. but dizzy gets my vote tho.

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You guys got zero official votes and the polls are closed. This is a tie and needs closing.
You should up your threads more and make sure to get your verses dropped quickly to give optimum voting time.

BTW I think DD took it with more playful and humorous lines. Not bad drops though. Peace.