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03-19-03, 09:29 AM
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small verse for song give feedback
IP: 183C 5596
nigga I'm from the northside
my side of Houston Texas home of gettin yo ass whupped and comin off yo watch and necklace we boyds nun in this bitch we here for the better keep bumpin ya fuckin gums and get hit with the beretta want some come get some its all good in the wood on tidwell oh-well nigga thats yo brains on the hood you shouldnt talk so much shit nigga we'll run up quick cuz niggaz real desperate they walk around with them bricks thats where im from nigga NAWF side in this bitch cuz when the north meets the south its gon get durty and shit |
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03-19-03, 10:22 AM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: 144A ADA4
it really didn't flow too good... a'ight as far as an early attempt goes... you need to work on some more complex longer bars, maybe some punches, multis would really help ya style too..
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03-19-03, 10:23 AM
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IP: 183C 5596
pic of me
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03-19-03, 01:16 PM
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IP: 5153 3B92
i was feelin this. just throwing up your hood cant be bad. in spots where u had the 2nd bar to complete the hook did give this peice a choppy flow. try making it hook after the end of every bar. exzample is the first 2 bars can be put into 1, ya know. return the favor.
peace
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