10-16 lines
5-0 = Win
3-0 = KO
U spit first
no crew
no hate
no d.r
no recycle
no biting ur verse iz due 1 day afta u chek in iight , ima chek in wen u put ya verse

ok then

ey yo//
hey,gimpy felon~e,why are ya' jumpy?//
i think it's cuz' you see that i'm da' better emcee//
ya' better get back to ya' work,where you never will be promoted//
but,hey,as a gay porn star there isn't much chance to be noted//
look at ya' fuckin' pic,if i'm right it's wolverine//
that's the stupidest thing i've ever seen//
kid,i don't know how old you are,maybe a small teen//
c'mon,you can reveal it,you're a 12 year old bitch with name christine//
i'll kill every protein of you,it's just routine//
doesn't matter if blade or gun//
killin' you is easy but fun and it didn't even have begun//
you take ya' popgun and i my shotgun//
haha,now lets see who's gonna run,my rhymes are hotter than da' sun//
against me you got no rhymes,you'll start to stutter and hung//
oh yeah bitch,i'm done,have killed another one//

15 lines,your turn!

dats it iight lets go

~1~ima burn ya ass like a bitch wit a dirty clit
~2~ya mom burn me dats y i only fuk her b-tween her tits
~3~i cant talk bout ur mom if i'll kill u 4 talkin bout mine
~4~juz tell her da next time i com 2 fuk ,2 let me skip da line
~5~im sumthin dat will kill u, u superman im Cryptanite
~6~keep fuckin wit me n' u'll b sleepin in a CRYpt tonite
~7~u like a god, da wackness emergency Center iz ur Temple
~8~my gun's names iz Oxy pad cuz i'tll pop u n' ya pimples
~9~u 1 of dem niggas dat go 2 jail juz 2 get raped
~10~nah u one of dem gurls dat fuk R.Kelly juz 2 get taped
~11~if u eva n a concert, niggas gonna say BOO da hoar
~12~out of my 9 hoes ya mom iz numba 2 or 4
~13~im blak n fom da projects may b u can learn from me
~14~cuz theres no such thing as a rapper from hamburg Germany
~15~ now that im done u my bitch i got u on smash
~16~ima call u world trade center cuz deres nuthin left but ya ash

HOLLA BAQ J.R

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice spit dawg!
c'mon people,vote!

c'mon people,plz vote!

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yo v u need some work son, u need ta like really find urself!
cuz felony had u da whole time cat. betta flow, but felony ur momma janks was played. so keep that in mind!
noth'n but constructive critasizm
and i can't spell!

my vote=felony

thx 4 vote!
need more!

^^uppin -.-

felony was way more creative with his verse.
V try using better punches...

vote:felony

felone=winner
better all around that opther cat needs some serious work if he wants to win some battles

im goin with felon-e- on this 1
better punches, better flow.
v that was a sound attempt. 4 a german u write pretty gud english, keep it goin
v=felon-e-