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Old 03-27-03, 04:45 PM   #1
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not wrth reading..peace

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Old 03-28-03, 10:44 AM   #2
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Most definetly felt, content...

...no criticism on thisd piece, it was just very raw, and emotions seemed to be vented real good...

...anyway, as i said before, hope you find the right decision to make for both of you....

...respect...
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Old 03-28-03, 02:05 PM   #3
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RAw like Var said...and Long piece but the contend was verry verry good and emotions were expressed...thatss what makes it great poem....


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Old 04-01-03, 11:21 AM   #4
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that was nice man. very emotional very raw. you say what u feel so well...one love man.
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Other than the way it was written i understood the script-- keep it up
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