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04-04-03, 06:12 PM
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jus a Tayste....
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When our eyes met we became one
one heart one mind one soul what can i say to try and explain how i felt when i first touched you..kissed you..caressed you words can not be expressed on how you make me feel expression comes with emotion and emotion deals with feeling and the way i feel makes me wonder if what i feel is real you are my girl are you the girl next door or the one in my dreams..or are u a vision of my imagination no..its real..as real as it gets ______________ a lil somethin somethin i wrote a while ago-jus put on just so put on..holla at meone |
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04-04-03, 06:14 PM
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eyo
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So tell me what ya'll think iight....
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04-04-03, 06:51 PM
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I Am The Light
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take it to poetic scripts
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04-05-03, 08:00 PM
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IP:
it doesnt' belong in the compettion.... sorry...
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04-05-03, 09:37 PM
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...im sorry too
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04-06-03, 12:12 AM
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my bad i didn't mean to put it in this tournament...
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04-07-03, 04:52 PM
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yeh it was alright, use some more vocab, and expand a lil' who u talkin about salome
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04-08-03, 12:08 AM
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IP:
I think i wrote this wen i was dating her ya..this was not a good poem at all i thought it was one of my weak ones
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