--calling all units.. there's a robbery in progress at 1850 st.clair avenue.. please respond, top priority.. suspect is to be considered armed....--
--beat starts--

damn, how'd this shit happen, sirens surroundin' the building I'm trapped in.//
need an escape rout, gotta scape out with tha weight now.//
I ain't come this far to just lay down, I'm-a blaze rounds before I'm-a give up.//
live up to my name, if I don't make it, well.. 'least I ain't locked up in a steel cage.//
cold cell for my cold self commitin' a point blank homicide with a cold caulked gage.//
I told the bitch on the floor is where she should stay.//
she moved, what can I say... I had to do it.//
it's all part of the game when you lootin', pillagin' comes with the need for a gun, and guns are for shootin'.//
I was so stupid, I just got a lust for bucks.//
I need cash, addicted to paper stacks, havin' pockets fat without liftin' a hand at a 9 to 5.//
when I walk up in a case the adrenalin makes me feel so alive.//
like fucking for the first time, it's pure pleasure.//
the power, it over-powers, knowing you the one holding the cards is like a whole other level.//
hoping you never get caught, but it's only a matter of time.//
I slipped up, lord.. I prey, is it my time.//
am I destine to die before I even see the blue of the sky.//
will I be rushed and busted by shots fired from glocks in the hands of cops.//
another life taken, another statistic of a robbery flawed.//
damn, I wish I just won the lottery draw.//

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I Didn't Qwite Undaztand the Flow. The Topic was Good, Yoo Stayed on Topic but Vocab Lacked. Was a Nice Piece All in All.

uppin'

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why the fuck are people sleeping on hottness..

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people really need to start taking pills to stay AWAKE.....

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well the topic is played to my knowledage about 5 heads in here now have a topical up about robbery and second ya need to change ya rhyme-scheme its sorta confusion and punchs wouldnt hurt in this type of topic neither

just my .02$

it's a complex rhyme scheme.. like it has to be performed a certain way to sound right.. and it was a story, so there's no need for punches... good battle by the way.. another fuckin' loss on my record...

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why is it half the replies on my posts are me uppin'.. you people really gotta stop sleeping..

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yo, I liked this piece.
the topic is a little played, but you did it well. I thought the apb at the start was a pretty dope idea, not very origional but it worked.. stay poppin' dawg