3 vote = KO
5 vote = Win
(based on poll votes not written)
10-20 lines.

u aint checked in yet.

aight,
ur called MC Enemy but ur a faggot in all honesty/
wanna boost ur wins up by tryin 2 battle me/
but u didnt realize dat i'm on the verge on bein legendary/
u beating me comes no way near to being looked as reality//
this is already a one way battle and its hardly even started/
cocksuckers like u think u battle like ur already full-hearted/
wake-up and look around coz ur vision is blurred and distorted/
stop dreaming coz ur aint as good as u think u r, u’ve just been deported/
i’m on another level and my rhymes gonna leave u deserted//
ur no enemy, well maybe 2 a few faggots like you/
u cant compare 2 any1, ur a dickless faggot and that’s true//
mu’fucka I’m gonna slaughter u and u aint even sed a word/
i’m gonna rip u apart, tear out ur heart, this shit may sound absurd/
but don’t try and battle me coz I spit ill rhymes that sound disturbed//
fuck it, fake MC’s like u don’t deserve 2 read my lyrics/
this is the worst freestyle I’ve produced including the gimmicks/
but shit, its enuff 2 beat ur poor written pre prepared lyrics//
its near the end of the road 4 u now and this has been lame/
this is the nineteenth line and I’ve put u 2 shame/
in this battle, I have now showed u how 2 play the game//.

pretty poor i kno.
lookin 4 feedback on the verse plz.
u have an hour now 2 post ur verse.

alrite i'm checkin in.
verse comin up next

yo, i'm gonna kill u nigga
dont make me pull this trigga
we kno i'm da man dats bigga/
i'm the best of all u who think they flow
my rhymes 2 so powerful, in the dark they glow
ur just gay, bro/
i'm the best
no one can contest
MC'in is like me lickin a woman's breast
no one can give me a worthy test/
i'm the MC EnEmY
no one can compare to me
i beat any one lyrically
i'm just too big of a G!

i gotta go out 4 a bit now but i'll b on later 2 check out my victory!

http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41324

vote on that and ill vote on this

VOTE: Ripper
WHY: Mc's verse was prety wack!, Rip' used decent rythme scheme, flow etc...

keep elevatin though!

wot da fuck was dat kid on?!
that verse was shit!
someone plz vote on this so it can be over and dun wit.
and i thought my verse was poor!

thanx man
1-0
uppin'

vote=ripper....reason=mcenemy is gay......his lyrics proved it

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Blessed wit Skillz

well done u got the ko

thanx man
2-0 uppin 4 one more 4 KO.
poll vote says 3-0 so sum1 needs 2 explain their vote.
thanx and keep votin, i want a massive win over this bitch!
i'll check out ur battles aswell if u explain ur vote.