Yo mmm....this guy ask me to duet with him .....he sent his verse a couple days a go ...he aint online so i want u to tell me wat u think of this flow for the song


[hook]
[RT]You are a lover; borrow Cupid's wings//
[F]cos tomorrow, were gonna be like kings//
[RT]Romeo dead; and Juliet, dead before//
[F]it's only you baby, i truely adore//

We got through the harsh times and the good//
If only you knew how are love is beneficial //
We share so much affection//
Injection, that is what your love is like //
It makes me feel very funny//
when it goes all through my body//
Your devoted when we make love//
com’ here boy you better give me a hug//
My passion for you has suddenly elevated//
I dread the day we get separated//
It be like my world had crashed down around me//
How did we meet?//
Was it just fate?//
I don’t think so, We were born for each other//
The very first time I layed eyes on you//
I wanted to get intimate//
Wishes do come true //
’Cos last time I wished and I found you//
I love you baby//
2003 Romeo and Juliet//

[hook]
[RT]You are a lover; borrow Cupid's wings//
[F]cos tomorrow, were gonna be like kings//
[RT]Romeo dead; and Juliet, dead before//
[F]it's only you baby, i truely adore//

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yea dis i read 2 or 3 times dawg, i found if i read it super slow it was ight but that s my style so i liked it.

return da favere........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42988

yo zainy quit freepostin for real, and shortie i did not like this at all no rhythm very little rhymin in there vocab was not all that hot complexcity was seen i think that your boy could do better and hopefully you do better nuff said

odd gives it
1/2 mic of 5

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little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun