ok lil freestyle

im new to rapbattles, flow so hard make heads rattle/
i dont diddle or daddle, i straight flow/
when i grip tha mic, i dont let go/
you gonna know, Wrecka, a usualy occurance/
better cover yaself, get some insurance/
i gots tha endurance, i can go untill eternity/
my rhymes burn, like a 3rd degree/
im currently, in tha midst of hittin tha big tyme/
but fa now, im coo just doin my rhymes/
stayin on my mind, like all tha time/
it should be a crime, cuz of how much i wreck/
chek ya retrospec, and try and guess whats next/
dont plex, or hate, cuz my rhymes procreate/
neva hesitate, ryhme statred at at 8/
and ends at 8:08, call it a scandle like watergate/
with one exception, i aint nixon/
u probably ditch diggin, while im pussy denten/
like lawinsky and clinton, ha i know i got ya grinnin/
these words that im mixin, go so hard/
i wreck with no regard, im careless/
ur rhymes have no elevation, aka airless/
beware this rhym is contagious, gettin copied on pages and pages/
u makin minimum wages, while im stackin franklins/
so i know tha lyrikal war still wrages, but i have no more patients/
i should be locked in cages, but ill get tha key back/
ps hit me up, i need some feedback/

this drop was decent , , but wats diddle and daddle

Yo wrecka...This ArtikQlit of Raptism...Thought this drop wuz decent also...Some of tha lines could've been longer...could've showed more feeling..Keep postin mayn

it was alright but it could be better

"you gonna know, Wrecka, a usualy occurance/
better cover yaself, get some insurance/
i gots tha endurance"
u was gettin sumwhere...... yo try n rap about a topic na'mean,
umm i think they mae a rule where u dont post freestyles in open mic na'mean, 3rd post it was alrite, i mean for a noobie,

but u know the old sayin (well not really old its just my sayin)
GET ELIVATED OR GET ELIMINATED

YOU DONT DIDDLE AND DADDLE
MAN IF I THROUGH YOU IN THE DEEP END YOU WOULD PADDLE


nar thats was a ok freestyle....................