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Old 04-23-03, 02:04 PM   #1
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yeh you know the dill, you want us to peep your verse BUT NOT VOTE and give our commenting on it post a link here.
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Old 04-23-03, 02:14 PM   #2
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...96&pagenumber=1


check that out if u can
good battle
 
Old 04-23-03, 03:14 PM   #3
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Old 04-23-03, 06:21 PM   #4
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check this out and please give me some feedback.....

i thought it was a good battle ,...


one

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=40959



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Old 04-24-03, 01:21 PM   #5
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From my R.B.B.L. battle ...... Let me know

http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=39807

Some reason I get numbers instead of the name rapbattles....
 
Old 04-24-03, 03:20 PM   #6
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^^^...BreakDown...TS style...

"I got more Bars than penitentiary's your rhymes elementary//
You beating me is like sayin mike Jackson had plastic surgery successfully"...

You Opened With A played Bar...But Then Finished It Up Nicely With The MJ Joint...

"Theres a method to my madness but I haven't figured it yet//
Your minds in the clouds like a 7 foot russian space cadet"...

Not Bad...Coulda ReWorded It A Lil...Still Not Bad Wordplay...

"I'll terminate you like your Internet provider//
with more deadly intent than those kids from Colorado"...

So So...Might Fly Over Some Heads...

"Hit You with a table and chair call me the chairman of the boards//
I'll leave you strung out on rap like I was spittin guitar chords"...

Not Bad Again...Point Made...Prolly The Best Coupla Bars In Ya Verse...


"Don't care whut your name means and its only fair//
Cuz in my win column there'll just be a number there//
Please don't get defensive and bad mouth me//
cuz this aint JerrY Springer, Steve can't help you B..."

Pretty Much Filler Material...Kinda Simple...Jerry Is Played...

"I'm comparing you to a game on my Atari system//
so I can say you played out before anybody listened..."

ReWorded and A Lil More Thought...You Coulda Killed Em With Those Bars...

"I'm like a cheat sheet I come correct//
My words are hot even when I'm doin a mic check//
Bring you back to '92 kid Protect yo neck//"

Really didn't Finish Up To Strong...If AnyThing...You Want To Make A Statement With Ya Opening and Closing Bars...Keep Ya Readers Attention...

Jus TS'z 2 Cents...
 
Old 04-25-03, 02:11 AM   #7
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check this out,,,,,,please and i need opinions...

http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41469
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Old 04-26-03, 01:39 PM   #8
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Old 04-26-03, 02:03 PM   #9
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Old 04-26-03, 02:12 PM   #10
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if u post a battle here u shud peep someone elses
otherwise there's just gonna be loads of links with no comments on them.....
so i'll peep Chrits as it's after mine.......


edit;shit it won't let me.........

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Old 04-26-03, 02:53 PM   #11
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here's the break down for X

I'll Plow-Thru any "So Called Rapper" on this site, I Stay "Pumped" like Reebok's/
Even without a Beat-Dropped, I'll "Wear U Out" like Fat People who Speed-Walk/

^good line with a good punch straight away

usin half his brain, claim he's gonna grave "WHO?"/
please bitch...not even your memory card could save you/

^liked this some originality

its over...see X is lyrically sick/
damn you couldnt "Come Hard" IF YOU MASTURBATED WITH A BRICK/

^the come hard lines are played out to the max

dude needs to learn lessons, i'm raw in real essences/
battle ME, you get shook harder then Christmas presents/

^coulda had a better punch to it

son you really are killing me/
even if i had a body in BRAILE you still wouldnt be feelin me/

^good but cuda said something about being blind to help the punch

MUDEROUS, when words tossed in I drop bitches often/
you a NO NAME, watch me deal with this "NOBODY LIKE TUPACS COFFIN"/

^wasnt really feeling this but thats probably cos i didnt get it......

Now be Honest-With-This, stop actin like this Rap shits All In The Wrist/
You-Gon-Diss? man You will be on the "Phone" with "Nicoderm" the way you be Callin-It-Quits/

^good line nice punch

So if ya wanna test what I'm speakin, this is just One Invitation/
Cause your rap's is Mathematic an I'ma Subtract it From The Equation/

^maths lines are kinda played too....but was alright

If you were compared to a bird id be yellin "Black hawk down"/
Cause your gettin removed faster than the Iraqi Generals home town

^not the strongest of finishes but decent......u won this already anyway........
 
Old 04-27-03, 03:05 PM   #12
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Old 04-28-03, 04:55 PM   #13
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fgee thx alot on the feed bak i really appreciate it..1
 
Old 04-28-03, 09:35 PM   #14
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Old 04-30-03, 12:05 PM   #15
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hey yo check out this blaze session

the best BS ive ever seen[pun intended]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=41088

let me know what ya think
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