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I aint never going nowhere/
to get these problems off my head i dont care/ just dont stare/ and dont u dare diss me when im just tryin to come up/ trying to start small an then blow up/ i aint shrinkin for no one clubs scared to book me/ dont shut me down and please dont call me a rookie/ what can i do to change the negative vibes/ i'm breakin in hives and tryin to find places to hide/ take my self from this earth i just might committ a death sentence/ its like being in court not knowin ur next sentence/ til the day i stop imagining myself/ not worried bout money when my first album leaves the shelf/ i'm tryin hard and the best i can do/ if its elementary at least i graduated from preschool/ let me be me and stay out of my buisness/ i wanna murder rhymes and leave no room for a witness/ being downgraded it feels like a kick in the head/ and cant get up cause all im seein is red/ grading my lyrics like professor's what impossible methods/ i cant seem to do things right am i losing my edges/ im basin my strentgh on weaknesses forgotten the meanin of rap/ cause im thinkin bout my house on cribs when i get put on the map/ i feel like i'm caged in no matter where im rappin/ i could get crowds jumpin to the beat an gettem stumpin they feet/ like they was part of a frat party enough to call it a fleet/ checkin for anything that could be a positive topic/ im stayin focus on what im writin wit out focus i aint rockin it/ sounds like im rappin through tooth picks it aint soundin like shit/ i come out wit what i come wit it keeps me apart/ from what others see outside me and tares me apart/ i have no knowledge of college so my grammar be off/ so yall pissed off at me for coming out soft/ well im tellin a story so true it can hail to mary/ take the holy bible in my hand make it sound imaginary/ poetry's deep and i feel yall feelin me right now/ i may not spit my best at all times but what i write is what i write down/ |
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IP: EA73 E3A1
umm....
hmm.... work on flow. meaning. vocab. meta°s. lol. umm. disregard all that. just work on everything. and you will get better. thats what i do. work on everything. a circle is perfect... the world isnt round...
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IP: 1501 77A0
wack..........sand u shouldnt be so nice........work one everything......take a month off ur life go to soem deserted island....and try n elivate......lol
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IP: 447A C475
U wanna battle Trill
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IP: 0970 3196
yo i guess it was str8... i have seen better tho... if i were u i would boost my vocab and please work on your flow, word up...
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