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no crew vote
no dik vote
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i'll be back in a bit ta chek up on this

k, waitin on you to spit....dont worry...i wont verse feed...i just wanna make sure you show up with good rhymes...











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peace

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Yo i drop bombs of nuclear proportions on mista kool-aid//
battlin me... have ya wishin u taken 15th grade//
unable to stand or withhold my vocabularic dominance//
thinkin ya had a chance.. musta been... deep within a trance//
judgin by what u write u still havent completely recovered//
lyricly unacclaimed be tha pre writtens of ya label cover//
3-4, wel go head an notch anotha//
4-0 well now ya lost ta da atonym of brotha//
wrap ya up in a cacoon.... verse ontoppa verse//
try unwrap ya self, but da intensity... has built ya hearse//
shoulda stayed in school, wish ya played life in reverse//
claimin by ya avatar ya be mista jak da rippa//
but tha only jak ya rippin be da ass of anotha nigga//
its ova now ya been played by CarsonJet//
Fuel leakage leave ya drenched of intoxication resedue full of text//

next//

peace...

ayo, this is a real freestyle....imma kick it first since ya takin forever...yall vote for the real shit, not cyborgs and shit...cuz i put effort into the disses....
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yo, check one two, check ya self foe, say what say what say what?

yo look at this carson jet~cudn't be dope if hes spits out Phet//
my rhymes show you some sweat~like you was playin russian roulette//

copiying eminem like he was Bunny .rabbit//
the fact hes obssesed with a man shows hes a faggot//

have yall READ what he SAID~he sucks so much he earns the name dick-HEAD//

i'll muder this bitch brutally, to show some cruelty, but the fact he hangs out with kids usaully, shows he hasn't hit the age of puberty//

hold on let me shed some light, wearin small rubber you dont come tight//

now i know your verse is bittin~addin to the fact that you prewritten//

i spit shit thats original--i can tell that aint you, cuz you rhymes is fictional//

it dont matter if you hide and seek~i'll drop ya like girls cuz you dick is weak//

this fool might get chics~but its sad and sick~ that he lost his verginity on his dads dick//

This wack fool--needs to go to school--cuz his rhymes remind me of ja-rule//

whoa!!! ok rhyme.....nice timing!!! lmao!!! we dropped at the same time....i was gonna drop first cuz you took a while but oh well.....lets see votes

naw my shit was wak...i was runnin into walls line afta line....i jus said fuk it an posted.......good luck

ayo comon yall cut the slack...ive just voted on a whole buch of other battles....so return the fava

carson jet sucks ......man u pathetic, and if you want a challenge set up sumthing in a pm or shit. Yur shit is so damn old. Let the lord be with your ass......!!!!!!! peace, 1one1

aight ill give this one Kool-Killa because he had better punches he went at u hard....carsonjet really did have any and i felt kool-KIlla's better cause he flowed nice...........i dont have enough to poll vote but my vote go's to Kool-Killa...aight one holla back

ayo, i wud appreciate it if you dropped a vote without freeposting in the battle dawg....



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are u talking to me dawg cause im not freeposting...........aight anyways one holla back at ur boy...........

oh never mind im blind i see u talkin to grimey won right..........my fault at that one.........aight one holla back at ur boy...........

Yeah I agree wit dee above, Carson just ain't have enough punches. Think of it like a boxin match, can't box wit out throwin punches. Vote=kool

Wit dat said, vote on my battle. This dude tried to get on me cuz I live in Japan and say nigga. He didn't realize I just moved to Japan and I'm black. one

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1415#post411415

ayo can you poll in your vote man, cuz your vote dont count without that....thanx dawg....
ill be hittin ya battle in a while