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05-12-03, 08:53 PM
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Venomous Beast
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Lost Relic...The Battlefield.
IP: 4577 CD9A
I was sittin in my room bored as fuck.
So, I decided to make a lil written. Peep. G H O S T. -RELEASIN LYRICS LIKE RAIN BY SPITTIN SPIRTUAL CHAINS TO ADD SOULS TO MY COLLECTION OF REIGN. -BEEN ON EARTH SINCE THA FIRST LIFE, I WAS THA SERPENT THAT GAVE PERMISSION TO EVE TO EAT THA FRUIT FOR THA WORST SPITE. -CATASTROPHE HAPPENING VASTLY, THEN CAIN KILLED ABEL, THAT BASTARD, I SENT HIM TO HELL TO MEET HIS NEW GHASTLY MASTER. -RAPTURE SPECIMENS FOR A LIVING, I ROAM THROUGH DARKNESS TRANSPARENT, GIVING MY UTMOST GRATITUDE BY ADVANCED MIC SPITTIN. )(He woke up at the sound of a gun shot. He was in a cot surrounded by other soldiers. He remembered he was enlisted in the army. A alarm sounded as everyone awakened and started getting ready. He climbed out of the cot and went to the bathroom, Looking in the mirror. He began to freestyle.)( -WAR IS IMPREGNABLE, A FORTRESS OF INDIGENOUS EVIL...WEAPONS THAT'S LETHAL, RELEASIN SOULS TO HEAVEN AND HELL, I SEE THROUGH OPERATIONS...PROPHECIZE CONTEMPLATIONS, MY NAME IS SCRIPTED...HIEROGLYPHED ON SOLIDS BECOMING STONE AGE ART WHEN TIME HAS SHIFTED...ON THE BATTLEFIELD, A WHOLE DIFFERENT SCENARIO...CAMOFLAUGED SPIES TO CARRY ON DEATH ACTS LIKE KAMIKAZE-TYPE DRONES...BULLETS WHISPERIN FOR YOUR LIFE, SPRINTIN PAST HEADS...YOU STRIVE TO SURVIVE THA STRIFE, SOON OR LATER YOU'RE GONNA BE DEAD...DON'T GRIEVE BUT GREET THA REAPER WITH OPEN ARMS...CAUSE YOUR COURAGEOUS DEEDS, GOOD OR BAD, STILL WILL STAND STRONG. |
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05-12-03, 08:58 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Yeah that was dope
i liked your grim style, very mystical. |
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05-12-03, 11:06 PM
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BANNED for biting
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IP: FF98 53B8
I couldnt read this.........i dont like tha color dawg.............blue.......it blinded me , ,, anywayz dawg , , this drop was Tight
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05-12-03, 11:52 PM
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IP: 9C38 A373
haha that was a nice drop...yo i agree with Bash the blue thing wasnt that good of an idea....some of the lines i found hard to rhyme but like i said the piece was dope...the vocab was mad, the concept was good flow was a bit off in some places.............keep postin
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05-13-03, 03:52 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 6E8E 630E
Dope.
RELEASIN LYRICS LIKE RAIN BY SPITTIN SPIRTUAL CHAINS TO ADD SOULS TO MY COLLECTION OF REIGN. -BEEN ON EARTH SINCE THA FIRST LIFE, I WAS THA SERPENT THAT GAVE PERMISSION TO EVE TO EAT THA FRUIT FOR THA WORST SPITE. -CATASTROPHE HAPPENING VASTLY, THEN CAIN KILLED ABEL, THAT BASTARD, I SENT HIM TO HELL TO MEET HIS NEW GHASTLY MASTER. -RAPTURE SPECIMENS FOR A LIVING, I ROAM THROUGH DARKNESS TRANSPARENT, GIVING MY UTMOST GRATITUDE BY ADVANCED MIC SPITTIN. That was dope and had to be my favorite bit. nice mystical style
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Soft focus Whats the point of living? The voices in my head Feat. Rule Unlikely Alias More Comming soon! |
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05-13-03, 06:49 AM
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IP: 3FF9 C72A
yer i liked it shadow...where you been lately?aint seen no drops in here for ages....maybe i missed em or soemhting....but yeah i liked this,some of the rhymes didnt seem to work but,but i stillliked the idea of the cat gettin up in the middle of a war and jsut freestylign ahhaha...nice...
bismillah |
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05-13-03, 08:26 AM
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Venomous Beast
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IP: D160 7C6D
Good lookin.
Thanks for the replies. Up' |
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05-13-03, 08:46 PM
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Venomous Beast
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IP: 0C63 A5AA
Up'
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05-14-03, 11:48 PM
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Venomous Beast
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IP: 399E F0FD
Uppin..Dazamn.
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05-19-03, 10:15 AM
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Venomous Beast
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IP: D160 7C6D
Up'
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05-19-03, 11:10 AM
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IP: A2C2 E6C9
This piece was ok, You've done better, Annoying Blue characters I agree with everyone else but its your theme so whatever, Come harder
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05-19-03, 11:45 AM
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IP: 4CC1 040A
yea i really wasn't feelin this piece...i think it coulda been longer...and i think the whole "dark" style of it was kinda poorly written..and the color sucked....but this is def constructive critiscism
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05-19-03, 11:56 AM
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IP: D12B 3A56
maaan this was evILL..lol..
no doubt..feelin ya style homes.. |
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05-21-03, 08:27 AM
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Venomous Beast
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IP: D160 7C6D
Bah..Thanks for the replies.
G H O S T. |
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