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first timer but heavy rhymer
IP: C3CE 9765
I was that drug dealers dream, a crack feen/
drainin da fluid from my spleen wit pills from white to green/ things don't always look as good as they seem/ matter of fact they aint good at all/ drugs is one of the reasons for my downfall/ tryin to make things better/ i'll do wuteva it takes to get a break in life/ I'm tired of doin wrong before right/ I'm trying to to fight an addiction/ before i go into extinction, like the dinosaurs/ i only got one choice but to voice my opinion/ and to show you life is'nt always good just cuz u didnt grow up in the hood! Last edited by deeni : 05-30-03 at 09:55 AM. |
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 44B7 B6C4
this was decent for ya first time, just work on, everything...
return the favor and peep mines called Not the Average
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IP: A619 75AB
not bad man, you need to drop some more into your shit, but keep elevating it'll be good
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IP: C1DA C961
Yo that was decent for da first but structure your bars.
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