Aight the last one messed up so this was lawtons verse

ill eat white chocolate on a black cake
im feelin that ur lines are all gonna be fake
ur not feelin wot im sayin to yo
as i rite this shit im being to grow
im better than u in many many wayz
ur moms looking ruff shes seen better better dayz
hiphop 101 is the game im in
the only thing ur in is the fucking rubbish bin
searching for scraps to enhance ur crap raps
cos u need sum help from the whackness emergency place
im spittin these lyrics straight into your face
cos ur a disgrace to the human race
face it ur a faggot with no skill
and u use a dildo to get ur only frill



Ok and this was mine WhiteChocolates

1 Sylible rhymes. That was my anticipation
My rhymes are hot, i see you sweatin, thats common hesitation
Your rhymes go for 5 minutes, mine keep going, and going (Duracel)
After seein your first 4 linez i was sayin "Why is he still flowing?"
All you are is a vision without a rhyme like a snake without a rattle
Look at your rhymes bitch why you still in dis rap battle?
This cat didnt grew up poor, his parents gave him a wife and carrage
His real name is Flarence, his mom and dad have a good marriage
Like Old Yeller i gotta put your rhymes to sleep
But unlike old yeller, when you die no ones goin weep
They'll all say "Here lies a wannabe who wasted his time"
Watchin Chocolate makin millions while he just earned a dime
Stop tellin Admins your rhymes cuz all you do is bore um
If you want a win. Bitch go to the poetry forum


So vote this shit up…

im gonna have to give this one to whitechocolate his flow was just better on this one but not by much i felt his punches more and he had nice metas vote on my battle with young gadget and please vote on who was better -1-

oh and poll vote on my battle with gadget chocolate 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 11111111111

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lol whitechocolate took this shit. His was ok, put too plain, get personals in there and wordplay, decent flow....aight peep my battle yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4661#post464661
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i already said in the other thread that White took this one in every category

my vote=WhiteChocolate

hey white, u forgot to poll in my battle against Vaccine. Could u please go back and do that, thanks

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Yo, i was feelin it from White so imma give him my vote, harder punches and a nicer flow scheme. blah blah blah

Blah blabh blah blah ill upp this shit for you guys too lmao.............................................. .................................................

my vote goes fo whitechocolate.. better flow and punches..
yo LAWTON.. if you add more punches and disses it would reaslly help..it was too short and simple..
vote: whitechocolate..
yo vote for the best verse on my shit vs. bonez1000


peace

white chocolate i wanna battle you.. i dont like the way you used parts from 8 mile in one of your battles.. im new to this shit so show me how to battle people and ill battle you, cmon bitch

white chocolate, you gonna stay the pussy bitch that you are? or do you wanna fuckin battle? cmon bitch battle me pussy

Bitch suck my dick first of all i had that marriage shit way b4 8mile took it so blow me . Uppin lets finish this.............................................. .......................................

YO THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE i AM GOING TO GIVE THIS ONE TO WHITECHOCOLATE FOR BETTER PUNCHES AND WORD PLAY

GO HIT MY BATTLE AND MAKE AND HONEST POLL VOTE
AND I'LL POLL VOTE AT YOUR SHIT