15 to 20 lines you spit first GL

ight....
Check it...yo yo....


Somehow you get by in here wit using "2" words as a "sentence"//1
but when u see my "rhymes", you lookin at "perfection"//2
but u in da wrong "section", u need to "elevate", but thats gonna take more than a "few lessons"//3
and no u tryin to be "messin", well sorry i aint "dirty", so dont be askin me fo any "confessions"//4
Im sick of niggas like you who think they so good, but only got 2 words, u could never come up wit more//5
i know u "stealin" and "bitin" rhymes, still thats somethin u can "afford"//6
but u still prayin to "lord", please this girl gettin on my "nerves", and its all cuz im grabbin ya by yo "spinal cord"//7
and niggasmake fun of u cuz u havent got da pussy, and u ahvent got anything but a fuckin "look see"//8
cuz no one wants a man who says "maybe" when they lookin fo da sex and "money"//9
and the only thing thats "funny" is when u look in da mirror, and u cant member the name of ur "honey"//10


omg weakk....but hey i'm tired...sorry fo that guys...i apologize really...butanways i gota get some sleep...payce

I'll vote for this shit when yall finish....vote for mine too pleaz

DarkForce vs. Carsonjet
DarkForce vs. Weezy
DarkForce vs. The Real Terror

sorry that i didnt do 15...i had 10....i had to get off though....but post up...payce and goodnight......................................... .................................................. .................................................. ................................

would u just post....so i can go to bed....so i know ur not a fuckin no show.............................................. .................................................. ............................

ill hit this shit up once da other dude spits......................
holla..........................................

sick of this no sho shit....whatever i'm out....payce...................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................................

the two-liners where bullshit u nitwit thinking i was someone u could outwit/1
calling me a motherfucking girl when ur really the one wit the clit whos tryin to spit/2
storming into this battle thinking that the win would be automatic/3
in reality i came in here dropping all this shit cuzing static/4
in this rap game thts sink or swim u wont even float/5
wht the hell is wit all of this gay motherfucking "quotes"/6
this motherfucker is just another wannabe tupac, talkin shit like he owned a glock/ 7
bitch look at the motherfuckin clock, and its already past this bitches bed time, pussy dont talk/8
jayk lend me ur Ak so i can take this bitch out tonite, thinkin he can hand it to me in a fight/9
fucker at the end of this nite all ull be seeing is a tunnel and at the end is the fuckin lite/10

wow took some major prewrite huh.....damn....haha.....well now that it took you an hour to prewrite and 2min to do my "tired' shit.l....votes...

srry it took so long my gay friend turned off my comp and just to tlet u no i aint got no beef wit u, i no u probably better and actually think some of ya shits pretty dope

its ight man...i just hate when people prewrite shit....but i know what its like yo................lets get some votes............................................. ...........

well, this wasnt close in my eyes. being the other cat seems to be newb i think slik took this one. with better wordplay and flow. i didnt feel the other cat At all. but, thas how i was when i started out so dont sweat it. vote=slik^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

no prewright here man, i had to make it up all over again i was fucking killing my friend for a few mins 2 before i started again. now i got blood all over my keyboard!

ight ight....yo my shit aint so good cuz i'm dead tired...keep the votes comin...and i apologize to everone again fo readin my shit....It came out so bad...but i guess its ight fo dis battle